@elovepoetry. Lol @bread on the table. The writing quality and word count would determine the editing charges. Send a page or chapter sample to kenechi.uzor@gmail.com or write4allservices@gmail.com
Or call 08023485155.

This is good.

@TolaO, long, long time. Hope you good.

@Chiamaka1.
Nice one.
But note, when writing poetry, brevity and concision is virtue. Every word should count. Omit needless words. So go over the poem again and […]

Yeah. Still the best writing I have seen here.

Loool. That’s why they never learn.
Keep it up. Let’s see how far you go with mediocrity.

@Nalongo. Hi hi. Can’t believe it’s been two years I last stepped in here.
@elovepoetry, @jefsaraurmax.
Long time.

I work as an editor. I like to edit people who write competently.
So if you have a book let me know.
Not for free THOUGH.

This went too fast. It is also unrealistic. One minute two people were kissing, the next minute the whole village was pulling them apart and raining curses. Haba! Were the whole villagers hiding and watching them or what?

Not bad.
These are the kind of people I would like to edit.

Nice one. If you could make that title less obvious the poem would be great.
Find another word. Smile is too clichéd.

Nice work.

The first thing I’ve read here today that made sense.

I have finished the story. It still makes no sense. But I know whatyou were trying to do. It didn’t work.
Would have been a great story though.
Rewrite it later.

“She had been concerned with dishes, out of wedlock, for three years, when the scrambling mammal collapsed under the sink?”

Say what?? How can someone be concerned with dishes for three years out of wedluck? […]

Very boring o.

The commas in the second sentence had no business being there. You don’t throw in comma at random.
Google comma usage.
2nd paragraph last sentence should have been structured better: “I hadn’t spent up to a […]

Tense issues. Punctuation. The form, delivery or conveyance of a story is as important as the story itself.
Your story was reduced by the errors. Maybe editing would have helped.

Good writing.

Just google on how to punctuate dialogue.
Well done.

Loool. This is very bad writing, but, well…we are all bad at the beginning.