-
kaycee commented on the post, Craving Hope (V) 5 years, 8 months ago
@elovepoetry. Lol @bread on the table. The writing quality and word count would determine the editing charges. Send a page or chapter sample to kenechi.uzor@gmail.com or write4allservices@gmail.com
Or call 08023485155. -
kaycee commented on the post, Tardy Dreams 5 years, 8 months ago
This is good.
-
kaycee commented on the post, Clear Enemy 5 years, 8 months ago
@TolaO, long, long time. Hope you good.
@Chiamaka1.
Nice one.
But note, when writing poetry, brevity and concision is virtue. Every word should count. Omit needless words. So go over the poem again and […] -
kaycee commented on the post, Craving Hope (VI) 5 years, 8 months ago
Yeah. Still the best writing I have seen here.
-
kaycee commented on the post, Green. 5 years, 8 months ago
Loool. That’s why they never learn.
Keep it up. Let’s see how far you go with mediocrity. -
kaycee commented on the post, Craving Hope (V) 5 years, 8 months ago
@Nalongo. Hi hi. Can’t believe it’s been two years I last stepped in here.
@elovepoetry, @jefsaraurmax.
Long time. -
kaycee commented on the post, Craving Hope (V) 5 years, 8 months ago
I work as an editor. I like to edit people who write competently.
So if you have a book let me know.
Not for free THOUGH. -
kaycee commented on the post, Plot2. #Challenge me contest – The Dark Side Of The Sun 5 years, 8 months ago
This went too fast. It is also unrealistic. One minute two people were kissing, the next minute the whole village was pulling them apart and raining curses. Haba! Were the whole villagers hiding and watching them or what?
-
kaycee commented on the post, Craving Hope (V) 5 years, 8 months ago
Not bad.
These are the kind of people I would like to edit. -
kaycee commented on the post, A Smile 5 years, 8 months ago
Nice one. If you could make that title less obvious the poem would be great.
Find another word. Smile is too clichéd. -
kaycee commented on the post, “I Long To See That Day” 5 years, 8 months ago
Nice work.
-
kaycee commented on the post, Simple World: dreams of the growing ocean 5 years, 8 months ago
The first thing I’ve read here today that made sense.
-
kaycee commented on the post, Dead Dog 5 years, 8 months ago
I have finished the story. It still makes no sense. But I know whatyou were trying to do. It didn’t work.
Would have been a great story though.
Rewrite it later. -
kaycee commented on the post, Dead Dog 5 years, 8 months ago
“She had been concerned with dishes, out of wedlock, for three years, when the scrambling mammal collapsed under the sink?”
Say what?? How can someone be concerned with dishes for three years out of wedluck? […]
-
kaycee commented on the post, Murder With Conviction: The Beginning. 5 years, 8 months ago
Very boring o.
-
kaycee commented on the post, Green. 5 years, 8 months ago
The commas in the second sentence had no business being there. You don’t throw in comma at random.
Google comma usage.
2nd paragraph last sentence should have been structured better: “I hadn’t spent up to a […] -
kaycee commented on the post, Hell Of A Dinner 5 years, 8 months ago
Tense issues. Punctuation. The form, delivery or conveyance of a story is as important as the story itself.
Your story was reduced by the errors. Maybe editing would have helped. -
kaycee commented on the post, ChallengeMe Contest – The Remedy Dinner. 5 years, 8 months ago
Good writing.
Just google on how to punctuate dialogue.
Well done. -
kaycee commented on the post, The Good The Bad and the ? 5 years, 8 months ago
Loool. This is very bad writing, but, well…we are all bad at the beginning.
-
kaycee posted an update 5 years, 8 months ago
Whoa! Over 2 years since I stepped in here. Wow.
- Load More

Welcome back!