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Raymond

@raymond active 8 hours, 48 minutes ago 44656pts Rank - Head Wordsmith View all contributions by Raymond

http://rayelenwoke.blogspot.com For the horror fans in the house, check this out. It’s a novel I’m working on. Read and tell me what U think… View

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Raymond commented on the post, The Last Curse (Chapter 2) 1 day, 12 hours ago

Okay, where is Chapter 1? Want to read now.

Good take on the zombie niche. I usually shy away from it cos it has been rehashed way too any times, but hey, rock on.

Watch your words though. When writing […]
Raymond commented on the post, I See Things Others Do Not See(7) 1 day, 18 hours ago

Too abrupt, the way he let his secret slip. Have my own ideas, but it is your story, so…
Not bad. Fix all fixables for the next one. Remember, pacing… Good luck.
Raymond commented on the post, I See Things Others Do Not See(6) 1 day, 18 hours ago

Not bad.
Raymond commented on the post, I See Things Others Do Not See(5) 1 day, 18 hours ago

Not bad.
Knew the teritory this was going from the 2nd chapter.
So who is he, Nigeria’s own Odd Thomas?
You really need to stop rushing your writing…
Pacing is key in writing…
Raymond commented on the post, I see things others do not see (4) 1 day, 18 hours ago

……Meh.
Atmosphere matters.
This was a short scene, but that’s not the point. There are critical points in every story or scene, and this was one of them. This was rushed. The moment between your MC and the […]
Raymond commented on the post, I see things others do not see (3) 1 day, 18 hours ago

…For me the opening was not so strong, and the end was even worse (no offense). Personally, when writing series like this, I try to end it with something that will stick in the mind of the reader, creating a […]
Raymond commented on the post, A Series: I see things others do not see (2) 1 day, 19 hours ago

Easy read. Not bad, but this became predictable once the girl stepped into the picture…
Still…off to the next.
Raymond commented on the post, A series: I see things others do not see (1) 1 day, 21 hours ago

Not a bad start… Like the fact that you are trying not to make this a serious journal-like story…
Raymond commented on the post, Eater 1 day, 22 hours ago

Hehehe… Thanks…
Raymond commented on the post, Follow Your Dreams 4 days, 21 hours ago

Hmm…
Has a rushed feel to it. Feels a bit lacking in depth, altough it has a powerful message. You should study Psychology as a Masters Degree. I know you, you can do it…
P.S. Longest time…
Raymond commented on the post, My creepiest experience 5 months, 3 weeks ago

Hehehe. @Hymar, why should I?
Nice piece by the way.
Raymond commented on the post, The Shadow Chronicles 4 6 months, 4 weeks ago

@xikay, make the guy stay? You harsh oh!
Raymond replied to the topic NS Attendance Register in the forum Site Matters 6 months, 4 weeks ago

@topazo, the horros dey. Just busy at the moment. Too many projects on my hands… How you dey?
Raymond commented on the post, Sundown, 0666 7 months, 2 weeks ago

…Now this is much better than your cyborg story. Short, sharp sentences, driving the scenes home. Good pacing. Stick with this style; develop it and make it your own. You did good with this. Will look out for […]
Raymond replied to the topic Allowing members to Publish their own stories in the forum Site Matters 7 months, 2 weeks ago

I’ll say that the low quality of postings on NS is actually chasing people away. And the worst is that if you review the stories and tell them where the errors are, wahala. Stricter controls if possible. I remember those days when if your story gets published, you rejoice! Yes! I know that my first story took 2 weeks to be published. Chei!…[Read more]
Raymond commented on the post, The Clip: Call for Submission 7 months, 3 weeks ago

…..Hmm…
Raymond replied to the topic Selected Stories for Nighttime Tales on Smooth FM 98.1 Lagos in the forum Site Matters 8 months ago

@Afronuts, serious?
Raymond replied to the topic Selected Stories for Nighttime Tales on Smooth FM 98.1 Lagos in the forum Site Matters 8 months ago

Are they?
Raymond commented on the post, The Shadow Chronicles 4 8 months ago

@wordsfromuyi, thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. From the title you should know that there will be another part.
Raymond commented on the post, Is That A Poem Or A Group Of Quarreling Words? 8 months ago

@xikay, will this do?

http://www.naijastories.com/2013/07/the-shadow-chronicles-4/

It sure has been a while…
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