@The-zenith, I like part 3.The pace is nice and the characters are starting to develop. There is a slight problem.There are no big buildings around the Louvre as it is an old part of the city. Any building from […]

Nice one @nicolebassey! You were able to capture a lot in a short story. I love it!

@The-zenith, the story is promising but you need to show more and tell less. I assume you have never been to Paris by the number of times you say “beautiful” instead of describing. I was born there.If you need […]

Nice one @literati!

@jaywriter: thanks a lot for reading my poem.The pictures look nice.I wish I could have been there…
@kaycee, nice to see that you don’t change…
@zikora,there are women on NS, maybe they couldn’t […]

Thanks a lot @basittjamiu!

Congrats to all the winners!

Sorry I meant to address this to @evangprince2008.

@carlobasi, the woman who was trying to tend to her baby, probably didn’t think of covering her breast because her baby was her priority. The guy who gets aroused by a breastfeeding woman is the one who has a […]

Wow, two stories I thought would be there for sure, are not.Either way, Congrats to the ones who made it and Good luck for the next round! Also I would like to thank all of you who took the time to read my story, […]

Thanks @febidel!

Thanks @psalmy!

great article @ochuko.I have two sons and I completely agree with this.I raise them the same way I raise my daughters (I have two also), with the same love and the same expectations. We have a zero tolerance for […]

thanks @sueddie, but it’s not granny love, it’s just love.People don’t stop loving because they get older.The idea of the story is about sacrifice and commitment and how some people give up their dreams for the […]

@ifeanyienoch, you may want to check this story on a similar subject to see what I am talking about:

http://www.naijastories.com/2012/12/every-night/

@obiudenwe, this is a beautiful story on a difficult subject.The only thing I would work on is the end.It seemed a bit rushed to me.Otherwise great job!

@scopeman60, this is a beautiful writing.I’m not sure it fits the format of a short story but I loved reading it especially the first part. My two favorite lines are:
“I could not see you when you were here. And […]

@ifeanyienoch, your story has potential but you may want to rewrite it.The subject is interesting but you write it like a police report. Try to use more compassion towards your characters and show more instead of […]

Great story @psalmy! I love the way you told it and the ending.

@seun-odukoya,I believe the format for the contest didn’t include flash fiction but maybe I am mistaken.

Nice story @Seun-Odukoya. I like the repetition of “she shivers”.It gives a nice rhythm to the piece.I second @petunia007 though.It does feel like flash fiction.

@okindlaw, is this supposed to be funny? My favorite part is “Who will be there to welcome the man from work and make sure his meal is ready?” It reminds me of articles from the 1950s. I won’t even bother […]

Thanks a lot @deedee! I will apply the corrections.Happy New Year!

Thanks a lot @deedee!Please kindly let me know where the errors are so I may fix them.I knew the poem before I wrote the story and I liked it so I included it.I appreciate your comments.