I meant the second part of this one, after the first line of asterix

Lol…. I liked the second part. The first was all over the place.

Not bad. I like the simplicity.

Read more now. Get good books and read read read.

Looking forward to that

I enjoyed reading the two episodes. Want to read more before I give a more indepth feedback.

Short and simple, but well done still.

I enjoyed the retelling and your style. Others have said what I might have added. Keep writing.

I really enjoy your stories. Looking forward to more

I loved this! Very good.

@pionga, you are an English student so I want to believe you know better. I will however advise you to heed the words of your readers, even as you stick to your style. Keep writing.

I noticed you wrote sieze instead of cease for stop. I liked the transitions in the first parts, but the last one was quite a jump. Otherwise, very well done.

@sambrightomo, your poems are becoming too lost on the same one tract. Think of other things?

Intruiging review as I don’t think I’ve heard of this novel before. I’ll like to read it. Let me see if it’s on Amazon.

This one has gone beyond Eze going to school. Let’s see if he has the swag.

It wasn’t the best Monday over here, but this is a nice poem. I liked it.

thank you all

Not the best I’ve read from you, but kind of likable and funny

I would definitely like to see another part @wordsfromuyi. I like the language and style but watch your words, it is desolate, not desolated. Famed, not framed, etc…

Had me laughing at the end, but I guess it must not be funny for Pelumi

So they already guessed who done it? That seems to easy and fast.

On the writing, remember your punctuation. And it is millstone.