As in…

I think I’ll drink like four gallons of vodka that day…

MADMAN IS BACK.

Welcome.

I like this comment. I really like the ‘commenter’.
It’s not my fault.
He’s just so……..

Thanks @loveliest, and according to you, bless God.

Emma.

@Scopeman…I almost guessed this would happen…but I still appreciate and feel the twist. Nice one.

Please don’t make the woman kill her man over nothing. At least let him shag Sussy once.

Nice.

I don show. This matter cannot die when I havnt said my piece.
First, daprof, your write up was superb. I love it.
@Afronuts and @scopeman, you guys were totally out of order. You ά̲̣яε lucky I came in too […]

She jumped to a conclusion similar to that I assume…

I like the lyrics more. But you still have issues with the telling of the story. I told you that in the previous instalment.

I love this poem. I really like the writer.

Really. It’s not my fault.

She’s just so…beautiful.

Thanks so much everyone. More especially @Eletrika. I appreciate your comments, it shows uve been following me “Bumber to Bumper”.

About the Clif and Hanger thing…. I will work on that

And then the yoruba parts…what are the non-yoruba readers supposed to do?!?!

I like the story sha.

Sigh.

I like the way it ended…I just don’t like the lack of an air of tension. I feel like the story progressed to casually…you dig??

Nice one. Now I actually want to read the next one!

@adaobi, why you no complete the ‘ha’ to reach three naa. Thanks sha.

Sorry, @Babyada, you did what???

Really? Thanks for the compliment @scopes.

“It wasn’t an easy fate”

I think you meant ‘it was not an easy feat’

Ada’s right – there’s something missing from the story. It feels incomplete.

Nice one though.

Oh, thanks gooseberry. You’re sweet. I really hope I’ll be able to post some more soon. I’m just having problems with getting them rounded up.

Yeah, I did this. Waiting……

lol…but the husband did not actually sleep with the nurse na….anyways, I shall convey your suggestions accordingly, hm…

I like everything about this except the end. Brother died months later after the deliverance? The snake was removed? Clear me up please. You kinda confused me at the end. I’ve not read the first. Ill go and read […]