@abdulquadri11. Thanks so much, words like yours encourage me to keep writing and improve on my writing.

hehehe…

Lol. Thank you, Ebuka.

Nice twist,nice story.keep writing

I guess a great work has been done on ths poem…more strngth to your elbw man

I wish you give us the male version of this story for a balance.i could hear some guys saying,’good for the ladies’.nice story

I have to say you proof read this work thoroughly. That is no mean feat for a post of such length.

This write up was by no means bad, but then I can’t say the story was compelling to read either. There were […]

@anakadrian. Thank you. Lol, yes I wrote the poem late in the night while I was tossing and turning missing my sleep.
Thanks for the correction on line 30.

Thanks for reading.

Enjoy.

Hahahaha….Thanks for dropping by.

Enjoy.

Line 30 should be “counting invisible sheep”

@danjuma your use of personification is so on point. You started with the character of sleep as a person and even gave him a ghost to top it off. The poem really read like what someone who is tossing and turning […]

Yes, its quite funny and all, but it got me thinking “what if she didn’t feel he was a nice man?” hmmm… Rough play.

Grief will never raise the dead not even building walls against our challenges nor attempt to halve our troubles.nice poem with good insight

The cover photo tho… quite off from what I had the story in mind to be.