Tears!!! I see Patrick as a changed being now, circumstances at times could force a change. thumbs up! to Patricia – mother-hen. I pray Tolu returns to her family soon.

I’ve really missed this story. whew! #suspense I hope it’s not just what i’m thinking………. the mama knows patricia? *starry eyes*

So emotional…..Good job.

lolx…i guess u’ll have to find out…..check out the next episode.. its featuring now….thanks alot for reading.

lolx…yea i get ur drift jawe…thanks alot for the corrections .wrote this story many years ago and never got it edited….i think the next chapter is featuring now though…kindly check it out, lets see if your […]

Okkkk..thank you all for taking your time to read, and all your comments. All observations have been noted..thanks once again…

@Praize, there is. Will put it up soon. Thank you for reading

I love this…you kept us hanging there, is there a continuation??

This story continues to be intiguing.

By now, to me sha… I’ve already confirmed that the Captain was the one who killed his wife (or he ordered it) and had her corpse burnt to conceal the evidence. The […]

erm…u’re welcome

erm…u’re welcome

That’s alright! What I do know is that there is always room for improvement.

Keep working on it! Keep writing it!!

What an admirable
attraction
making me to gyrate
as I call for more…

“I (slowly) and steadily grow patterns
In the dark.”

This is poeticlicious…..

Nice I’d say but the second to the last stanza should have been short, concise and precise as the first.