I so pity the determined guy; hope he doesn’t get eaten. Anyway, the others will save him.
Well done.

Yea, the guy is talking to the daughter…thanks for reading….

Thank you.

Thank you so much…I only left it for pple so see through the whole write up. Noted any way

Noted sir/ma thank you

Thank you so much. I will…*smiles

Thank you so much. I appreciate…

The only error I spotted was disinterested instead of uninterested. Or maybe it’s not an error; maybe you chose it on purpose to lay emphasis.
Interesting story; keep it up.

This is getting more interesting.
Keep it up.

This is unique because it’s the woman who is violent.
Well done.

And she snores…
I wonder about their sex life though. Poor guy

Lol, thanks for enjoying @vincentdepaul

Next episode is coming up @Nalongo

Does this really happen?

Lovely rythym,lovely rhyme,lovely poem

@Afronuts thanks a lot

That Diana-guy, he’d in dire need of deliverance!