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Harun Ibraheem and
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Prima Facie 3 8 months ago
@literati, thanks for summoning me from the grave. 🙂
The story wasn’t exceptional; I have read stories with a similar plotline before. But it was interesting and well-written. Well done, @efiokbrythe.
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, The Reversible Nature Reaction 1 year, 3 months ago
Interesting story, @kodeya, although the end felt sort of anti-climactic. It would have been more interesting to hear the story from Emeka’s point of view, especially at the point he realised who his latest […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Ask a Lover 1 year, 3 months ago
I liked the thoughts behind the poem. How hard it can be to decide when time is fleeting.
Be aware of the tenses you use when considering situations that could happen (as you are doing in the poem). The first […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, In search for my other half 1 year, 3 months ago
I liked this story, @benita – it was amusing and well written. Poor Sandra – too bad that she misjudged the occasion. Will we hear more about her adventures to find her other half?
Well done.
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Chapter 1 & 2: Blood On The Altar 1 year, 3 months ago
@acmesuccess007, this needs a lot of work; there is a lot of tense confusion and cliche usage.
There’s definitely a story, although it feels a bit melodramatic. The motivation for Blessing to sleep with the […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, MOTEL BLUES [Episode I] 1 year, 4 months ago
Interesting start to the series, @poetrazon. Well written too, except for a few errors here and there (e.g. loose instead of lose).
Bella doesn’t sound like the kind of person to care whether anyone tells a […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Insomnia 1 year, 4 months ago
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, My Dream Love 1 year, 4 months ago
Hi @afronuts. Long time.
The story you refer to is this one: http://www.naijastories.com/2012/11/insomnia/
@durodolu-john-adewale, I think that my issue with this story was that it was too verbose, and the […]
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Tola Odejayi posted a new activity comment 1 year, 4 months ago
Interesting thoughts. I think that Valentine’s Day is more special for people who sell flowers and cards than for people in relationships, though! 🙂
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Avian d’Erosã 1 year, 4 months ago
I liked the idea of the story, @ojestar – a being that spreads love from person to person.
However, you need to pay more attention to detail – your story has many phrases that are poorly constructed, like […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Iwalewa III 1 year, 4 months ago
This was well written, @bunmiadebiyi.
Is there another installment? I hope the protagonist’s story doesn’t end on such a sad note.
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Tola Odejayi posted an update in the group
EVERYDAY NAIJA 1 year, 4 months ago@ochumik, are you going to be posting stories of Everyday Naija, then?
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Yes. working on some recent events that happened over the weekend Valentines day I.e
Good morning.
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Tell Me About Yourself 1 year, 4 months ago
Good story, @kwiksie. Definitely worthy of being an Editor’s Pick.
Thanks for bringing me back. 🙂
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Tales From The Other Side 1 year, 4 months ago
Hi @dees-hive,
Sorry for the late post, but congratulations to you and the others for the publication.
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Clear Enemy 2 years, 1 month ago
Thanks, @kaycee – I’m doing fine. Hope you’re well, too.
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