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Tola Odejayi and
Ogbole Samson are now friends 1 month, 2 weeks ago -
Tola Odejayi posted a new activity comment 2 months, 3 weeks ago
What’s your story, @gabi? Advertise so that we can comment.
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, The Men She Loved (14) 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks for the heads up, @h0n3ydr0p5. When I get a moment, I take a read.
Well done.
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Tola Odejayi posted a new activity comment 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I haven’t read the book, @noble4d. What’s the book about, and why is it a good read?
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Waiting For Train 2204 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@kodeya, I’m still waiting for the novellas – they must have gone astray. Can you please resend, and send me a PM letting me know that you’ve sent them so that I can check?
As to errors, take the first […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Waiting For Train 2204 3 months, 3 weeks ago
@kodeya, straightforward story with interesting descriptions of an impromptu market, although you still need to work on killing those editing errors.
I’m surprised they left the phone for him; a stolen […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Surely We Had The Best Beginning 3 months, 4 weeks ago
@kaymillion, if you like it so much, you can always donate points to @ufuomaotebele to encourage her write more like it.
@ufuomaotebele, love is a very complicated thing… well expressed here by you.
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Tola Odejayi posted a new activity comment 3 months, 4 weeks ago
welcome to the group, @ejcharles. So – why did you decide to join this group? What do you have to say about movies?
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Tola Odejayi posted a new activity comment 4 months ago
Sorry to hear that, @jefsaraurmax. Whatever it is, I hope it passes soon.
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Tola Odejayi and
Raymond are now friends 4 months ago -
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Machina: AGADA 4 months ago
@codrojac, it’s easier to get a dialogue-only story to work when the plot is simple enough that I can concentrate on and enjoy the characters (as expressed by their dialogue).
The problem with this was that […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Pink And Black Kampala 4 months ago
Interesting and enjoyable story, @kodeya.
I like how you repeated the story with minor variations to show how, by degrees, Tola’s situation was getting worse.
I also like how you wrote from the perspective […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Machina: AGADA 4 months ago
@codrojac, I felt that this was too lacking in context for me to understand. I get that it was set in a war zone, but honestly, once it didn’t grab me in the first several lines, I just couldn’t muster the […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, ● The Cappuccino Lounge ●… 4 months, 1 week ago
Interesting article, although I’ve heard the arguments before, @six.
I’ll just say that you shouldn’t mistake order for design.
When someone digs out a shallow depression in the ground, then pours water into […]
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Tola Odejayi posted a new activity comment 5 months, 1 week ago
Good luck with those studies, @ufuomaotebele. I’m sure your fans on NS would prefer that you pass, even if they have to ait a bit for more stories.
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@TolaO Thank you for your kind words…
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Electives EPISODE 2 5 months, 1 week ago
Hm, @feio. All these men with green, blue, violet eyes self. Are you sure we’re in Nigeria?
There was good story development here, although this felt like a jump from the first episode. Also it was well […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Farewell…(I Hope Not). 5 months, 2 weeks ago
He lost it, he found it, he lost it again. Will he find it again?
I liked this very much, with lines like
“You got pregnant, and I got a cab”
and
“But by now, you probably would’ve built a bridge over […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, The FEAR Magic: Playing Dead 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@kodeya, I liked what you were trying to do here – come up with a creative way to get Chuks to leave town. But don’t you think that Chuks would be more likely to want to dispose of the body to make sure that […]
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Tola Odejayi and
Ibiso Nwachukwu are now friends 5 months, 2 weeks ago -
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Anything Can Happen (Part 4) 5 months, 3 weeks ago
No problem, @idiong_divine.
Welcome back to NS.
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