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Tola Odejayi

@TolaO

active 6 months, 2 weeks ago 43488pts Rank - Head Wordsmith

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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, The Reversible Nature Reaction 6 months, 2 weeks ago

Interesting story, @kodeya, although the end felt sort of anti-climactic. It would have been more interesting to hear the story from Emeka’s point of view, especially at the point he realised who his latest […]
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Ask a Lover 7 months ago

I liked the thoughts behind the poem. How hard it can be to decide when time is fleeting.

Be aware of the tenses you use when considering situations that could happen (as you are doing in the poem). The first […]
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, In search for my other half 7 months ago

I liked this story, @benita – it was amusing and well written. Poor Sandra – too bad that she misjudged the occasion. Will we hear more about her adventures to find her other half?

Well done.
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Chapter 1 & 2: Blood On The Altar 7 months ago

@acmesuccess007, this needs a lot of work; there is a lot of tense confusion and cliche usage.

There’s definitely a story, although it feels a bit melodramatic. The motivation for Blessing to sleep with the […]
OGUNSANWO DEBORAH and Tola Odejayi are now friends 7 months ago
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, MOTEL BLUES [Episode I] 7 months, 1 week ago

Interesting start to the series, @poetrazon. Well written too, except for a few errors here and there (e.g. loose instead of lose).

Bella doesn’t sound like the kind of person to care whether anyone tells a […]
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Insomnia 7 months, 1 week ago

Hi @fadehan,

This is coming terribly late, but I have been away from the site for a while. I guess the reason I wasn’t notified of this post was that you didn’t use my handle @tolao.

Sorry about the delay; […]
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, My Dream Love 7 months, 1 week ago

Hi @afronuts. Long time.

The story you refer to is this one: http://www.naijastories.com/2012/11/insomnia/

@durodolu-john-adewale, I think that my issue with this story was that it was too verbose, and the […]
Tola Odejayi posted a new activity comment 7 months, 2 weeks ago

Interesting thoughts. I think that Valentine’s Day is more special for people who sell flowers and cards than for people in relationships, though! 🙂

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Oluwaseun Ojegoke and Tola Odejayi are now friends 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Avian d’Erosã 7 months, 2 weeks ago

I liked the idea of the story, @ojestar – a being that spreads love from person to person.

However, you need to pay more attention to detail – your story has many phrases that are poorly constructed, like […]
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Iwalewa III 7 months, 2 weeks ago

This was well written, @bunmiadebiyi.

Is there another installment? I hope the protagonist’s story doesn’t end on such a sad note.
Antoine Ifeanyi and Tola Odejayi are now friends 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Tola Odejayi posted an update in the group EVERYDAY NAIJA 7 months, 3 weeks ago

@ochumik, are you going to be posting stories of Everyday Naija, then?
- MICHAEL JONATHAN replied 7 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Yes. working on some recent events that happened over the weekend Valentines day I.e
  Good morning.
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Tell Me About Yourself 7 months, 3 weeks ago

Good story, @kwiksie. Definitely worthy of being an Editor’s Pick.

Thanks for bringing me back. 🙂
Tola Odejayi joined the group EVERYDAY NAIJA 7 months, 3 weeks ago
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Tales From The Other Side 7 months, 3 weeks ago

Hi @dees-hive,

Sorry for the late post, but congratulations to you and the others for the publication.

-TO
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Clear Enemy 1 year, 4 months ago

Thanks, @kaycee – I’m doing fine. Hope you’re well, too.
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Clear Enemy 1 year, 5 months ago

@chiamaka1, I liked this. It was clearly written, and it describes something that is very common in many societies.

Note: “the betray of the highest…” should be “the betrayal of the highest…”
Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Phantom of a disturbed mind 1 year, 5 months ago

@shovey, I had the same question that @thaprince had too about what caused the break up. In fact, I felt that in covering the entire duration of the relationship, the story tried to cover too much and left out a […]
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