@ jonnysnow: Thanks for dropping by and reading. This is all of the story as it is a flash fiction piece.

Cheers!!!

what I like about this is how you made a seemingly simple event of the everyday Lagos life into a story.Lotta kudos to you for that.Enough has been said on the grey areas.

Well done!!!

Not bad.

Well done!!!

Nice one. Now we’ve gotten to see a bit of the personality behind Da Writing Engineer!

And I even got a mention…..’blushing’. Just keep writing bro. It will sure be rewarding one day.

Cheers!!!

A very good one @ hesey. It is a woman thing,that’ss what I think and there is no wishing it away. It will jusst be good not to be vain about such things.

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@ Banky: You can flatter somebody sha.It won’t be much of a wonder if you have shorties falling all over your feet with this skill.

@ Afronuts: Was there any point in the story that the writer suggested the MC was not feeling any pain?That he decided to take it with a whimper does not wish the pain away.And I believe that point you were […]

This is good. It kind of reads like an episode out of a series? Wld try to look around for more of your works.

Well done!!!

@ banky: What more can I say?If there’s anything like a perfect story,I think this is it. There are just two areas I have issue with,would get to you when I’m around aa laptopm

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what I have come to realise it that…………just write! You will find your voice and a stlye that is uniquely yours.

This is a very incisive piece.

well done!!!

Lovely ending Writefight.

well done!!!

Now this is a trulyu heartfelt story.It deserves the spotlight and of course the win.

Don’t stop writing.

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I am just so sad.To think that I was in Lagos and I absolutely had no idead abot this.

So sad.So so sad……..*shaking head*

I think you have a good story in your hands.Just heed the corrections and you can only get better.

Waiting for the next part.

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Not bad with a clear message.Could do with better structuring though.

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Not bad.

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When a piece makes me want to read more,the I regard it as good. But that is telling you what you know already.

Next part ASAP.

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This is real hilarious.I especially like the style of delivery.

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I absolutely love this.Just pay heed to all the corrections.You can only get better.

Well done!!!

A very good one.Loved the twist in the tale.

Well done!!!