Keep writing and you will evolve better styles. You’ve got the potential to be better.

You really can write and with patient honing of the same, you would get better. Though you can write, you do not have the brilliance of story or how to turn a usual story to a reader’s delight. Work towards […]

Bad reading+Bad editing = Bad and watery writing. And more importantly, when next you want to write, watch your tense. If you want to use the Present, stick with it and stop wandering between Tenses. Keep reading […]

You write well, however, this is not just brilliant. There are so many cliches and the most part of the narration is cliched. I was expecting, knowing you are narrating on a factual and real event, you would […]

This is really not it. You will get to that acceptable standard someday, just keep writing.

*deeply sighs* This does not interest me a bit. Just keep writing…

Man, check your tenses abeg. That is one of the things that puts me off in a short story. And your poor tense use really puts off yours. Good luck anyways.

Just work more on your story. This is not really what will win you this prize. There is no catching creativity in this story. Read more, writer.

Really good. I wish you good luck in the competition.

This is not gripping at all. A reader’s time is wasted reading this.

The young shall grow. Keep writing and you will get to that standard someday.

Uhmmm… This is good and funny too. I just don’t like the use of some of your elitist words. Those words spoil the naturalness of the piece. Good luck in the competition.

Good but you could still have written it better.

With the bad spacing in this story, it will seem you typed this from a mobile phone and submitted it that way. That is really bad, it spoils the reading for the reader. The words are just so cluttered up. You […]

This is naturally beautiful. I so love this story. You got me hooked all through it. I wish you the very best in this competition. I love this line as it commands a powerful imagery for me:

“I left the scene […]

I read this first and was confused. Seeing the glowing comments, I had to have a second reading, but couldn’t really make anything from the story. This story is not just it, writer. Really, you have a lot to learn […]

The story is good and brief too. Good luck in the competition.

Beautiful @afroxyz. You nailed the matter truthfully. This is exactly what is happening in church these days joor. But also, I believe, for the better good of all in the church, it is not good one dresses so […]

Congrats to the winners. Way to go, NS. When upcoming writers win prizes, they are emboldened.

For me, this is a cliched article. You only wasted time mentioning things already known. And why would you go to having this writeup in parts when you could still write the same thing within an article? Get a hold […]

This is really funny. I love the simplicity of the poem.

@layrite. Thank you so much for giving voice to this issue in Osun State. You’re geatly blessed for this. Good writeup.

Congrats, bro. Just keep writing and we will keep reading it.

I can’t wait to read this book.

Good luck in the contest. I do not hate these people but I want to give them some bulalas.

Good luck in the contest. I do not hate these people but I want to give them some bulalas.

Good one, Shadiat. I wish you good luck in this one. I mean in winning the dollars

This is deep. Nice work.