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  • You did a great job of catching my attention with the title of your piece plus your introduction pulled me in further..Nice one..
    Topazo is right; there are a few typographical errors but not enough to detract […]

  • Ha! I thought the man was done for! Thank God it was her wild imagination!
    Good story. I loved the flow and the atmosphere of expectancy you built up following the meeting with Niyi’s mother..well done!

  • Ha! U thought the man was done for! Thank God it was her wild imagination!
    Good story. I loved the flow and the atmosphere of expectancy you built up following the meeting with Niyi’s mother..well done!

  • estrella commented on the post, Eater 5 years, 8 months ago

    So the Anti-christ sires a child? how dreadful!
    Ray,its official…you’re insane and i mean that in a good way…
    I’m a Dean Koontz fan and reading something that he could have written except you did it better […]

  • Thanks love! Will do…

  • I wanted to take out the time to thank you specially for the points Tola. Coming from you it means a lot.thank you.

  • @Charla…Actually this piece was written in a state of self reflection.Life is too short without crowding it with other people’s expectations instead of our desire to be the best at who we are..and you’re […]

  • @Thomasmann…Your comment made my day as much as my write up was worth your while…thank you too.!
    @Gabbletalker…I’m glad you think so..thank you for reading..
    @Innoalifa…you’re fast becoming my favorite […]

  • There is something tragic about running away from who you are supposed to be. You think that you are the only one paying the price to be someone else and you forget that there are men and women, teenagers and […]

  • @innoalifa…gracias! Thanks for taking time to read it

  • @tola…its good to be back after a long while. as for the glass throwing act,it was done with a lot of deliberation especially after the first one was thrown,but i guess i’ll work on it some more for the sake of […]

  • ThumbnailThey sat side by side on the veranda outside the house, the evening wind chasing away the blazing heat of the day.
    ‘Do you remember the first time that we had an argument Ibe?’ Sandy asked.
    ‘Of course I do,’ Ibe […]

  • I have always wondered what it would be like to have blood on my hands.

    I don’t have to wonder anymore; now I know.

    There is so much blood on my hands that when I walk to the market place I hide my hands in […]

  • Come lunch time and I was still struggling to compile staff performance reports when he walked into my office without knocking.

    ‘Lunch? He asked, his hands stuffed into the pockets of his single buttoned pant […]

  • I believe that underneath every surface of good lies a shimmering of potential for evil that shows up as hitches in an otherwise beautiful relationship So what made me kill Ibe? It was nothing really when you look […]

  • ‘You killed your own baby, you liar!

    Even as he said the words to her, he knew that he had made a terrible mistake. The look on her face had him flinching on the inside but he refused to budge.

    ‘You told me […]

  • It was so cliché that she found herself almost sighing in exasperation even as it happened. Their eyes met across the room and she was overcome with the sensation that she had been cast into a vortex of history […]

  • Angel wings form beneath me,

    Spreading rapidly, spreading wide,

    On either side;

    I feel faint; I feel I can fly,

    With these wings that sprout out of my body:

    Not white, not white

    Just red, red […]

  • I’d been smoking pot and having wild sex for the past ten years without an iota of remorse and it was all fine by me until I ran smack into T-boy. Now, he wasn’t what you would call good looking but he had that […]

  • I say that I am beautiful,
    You say that I am not;
    You tell me what I am,
    I’d rather tell you what I am not.
    Without many words you make me feel dorky,
    flicking through your glossy insides
    makes me feel it is […]

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