While I love the couple you described, the Taxi driver’s job his passengers and the story in general, your choice of setting didn’t fit with the story.
There was no talk of traffic, he seemed to be in Lagos […]

Well written, I enjoyed it a lot. Freedom was there all along she just had to reach for it.

Nice. Waiting for more- watch out for them typos. And it is an emotional story, people hide pain behind reckless statements and indifferent attitudes, I felt the emotions.

While I kinda understood your transitions, some of your descriptions need work- e.g: his eye looked like a poodle- his eyes looked like poodle’s or maybe the way he looked at you reminded you of a poodle. Anna’s […]

I don’t think this is funny, its an unfortunate situation we’ve found ourselves in.

I feel the word coward is a lil too harsh-yo u don’t want to put off your readers, pls watch out for typos and punctuation.
Good effort.

“I wonder, I just wonder” like Olu Jacobs in the Third Eye, nice one…

Nice read and it feels complete. Well done!

Very interesting review, totally enjoyed it.

God help us all, Not all who are called Pastors are really pastors…

Will probably get to attend one of PurpleSilver’s readings, just keep me posted. Thumbs up Su’eddie…

I liked the fact that each of her decisions i.e. @8, @16… seem to lead into another tale. Keep in mind pointers and tips given by others. Keep writing!

Well written. Nice flow, effortless read…

Thumbs up! Interesting review of an equally interesting poem…

Intrigues…
Nice one, i have so missed NS. Am off to read more parts before I make my comments/

Scintillating read, well done!

Mixed feelings, but the end is really funny…

Way to go NS, unto next level things…