Nice one.

Rings very true with the age we find ourselves in.

Well written. I am keen to know what happens next.

Keep it up.

I like the idea of the poem but a lot was missing.

@sibbylwhyte

I’m kinda stuck with the good oldies. I still do Asa, Nneka and some other nice musicians. But there are no basics to go back to. The world’s changed, taste for arts has changed too.

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Nicely written. And good characterisation too.

Nice lines… “sweets for my sweet”, “Tomorrow I’ll be there to offer Kola a shoulder to grieve on and Lara a mother to cry to.”

You write well. Keep it up.

@sibbylwhyte I didn’t quite get if it was for stage or screen.

Hmmmmm…

*captures

@banky best captiures it. Good story, not so good ‘telling’. Characterisation was spot on.

I loved the idea of the story. And the subject too. But the emotions weren’t really there. I could only relate to the last nanny. But it was a fine attempt.