It’s a nice one I must confess, but you need to work the end lines again. If you think over it again, you could bring out the best of it. And don’t forget to add rhymes.

The spirit is in you.

Keep writing.

@simisolaade Thanks for reading.

@praize Thanks *smiles*

@phil Thanks for reading.

Nice one

Keep writing. *smiles*

@aplusn It wasn’t written in a hurry though, you just can’t do pass them at times. *smiles*

Thanks for your comment.
*winks*

@GereOchuko Thanks for dropping by.

@Shovey I hope so too.

Thanks for reading *smiles*

Wow!!! @Ufuoma you’re still the best

Nice one.

@gereochuko Abigail should more than careful o.

Thanks for reading! *smiles*

@aplusn Thanks for reading.

@shovey Abi oo Abigail’s boldness no be here o..lol

Thanks for reading.

@edydeyemi Thanks for reading.

@Ivie9ja Thanks.

@Nalongo Thanks.

@Ivie9ja Thanks for reading.