Is there a second part to this story?–several issues were not properly resolved e.g. (1) What job had Lanre done that the governor had to pay him? (2) Lanre seem to be a regular customer at the bar: in […]
* You used the pronoun ‘he’ for a goat?
* The goat heard a gun shot and was frightened, how come it started acting normally just in a heart beat? Moreover, it did not require a trigger to manifest its strange […]
* there were tense issues.
* Regardless? I’m wondering how it fits as a title for this tale.
* Watch your use of punctuations. There were places I felt a punctuation was needed, but […]