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writefight commented on the post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Sure Ceasar,I’ll do just that.
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writefight commented on the post, Ummimi [‘oo-mee-mee] 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Yeah, ‘sainted’, as in saints….It was deliberate.But scented still works,seeing that the next line has to do with the sense of smell.Thanks for reading
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writefight commented on the post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 2 weeks ago
@clemency,I am heartened.Looking forward to read your poems too.
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writefight commented on the post, Ummimi [‘oo-mee-mee] 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you Boss,your words mean so much to me. Gracias.
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writefight commented on the post, Ummimi [‘oo-mee-mee] 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Sure Bubbllina. Thanks for reading
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writefight commented on the post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 2 weeks ago
@nicolebassey,thank you for reading.
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writefight commented on the post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 2 weeks ago
I am glad you like it. @topazo. Thank you.
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writefight commented on the post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you Emeka
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writefight commented on the post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 2 weeks ago
You are free to have a varied opinion on a piece of work. It only reinforces the nature of artworks,to some it is a mere daub and splatter of ink,to some it is an intricate design,to yet some….it is an intricate […]
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writefight commented on the post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you Khadijah. I am glad you like it.
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writefight commented on the post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Cliches cannot be totally avoided, but the less frequent they appear, the better. One good yardstick for good poems is ‘freshness in language’ Thank you once again.
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writefight commented on the post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Well, at first glance you have a form of paronomasia using punctuation marks, at critical scrutiny, you realise it is about accusation of a crime/judgement. Thanks for reading,@josephoguche
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writefight commented on the post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Keep reading,the poems is multi-layered
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writefight commented on the post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you for reading/commenting/critiquing.
This is basically an experimental poetry form using ‘punctuation marks’ as symbolism in the theme of this work. Word play : Fun with word, pun with language to capture […] -
writefight commented on the post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Glad you like it. Poetry is a never ending evocation of feelings. The thrust of the message therein is hidden between the lines.
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writefight wrote a new post, Unhinged Clauses 7 months, 3 weeks ago
The ink stains splatter in writefights,
A passage of apostrophic grandeur
Lands me on the apotheosis of scare quotes
Slew of praises in exclamation clanged in
Punctuated claps
Murmurs follow,
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writefight wrote a new post, Ummimi [‘oo-mee-mee] 7 months, 3 weeks ago
This passionate morning, the sun sings
Flashing rays and blinding beams that zingsI rouse in your own fancy
Feeling the petals of pink begonia all over meI look at you
Hoping I could write your prayers […] -
writefight wrote a new post, Con-artists 1 year, 3 months ago
Of the whites and blacks, many a colour I perceive
Shades of grey and other darker hues
And one single bright colour piercing through
Clear, yet shielded by the palette of the […]
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writefight commented on the post, Our Ram Is Haram 1 year, 3 months ago
Nice story, I give it a thumb up. You may want to replace akara with ‘kosai’ [one is yoruba,the other is hausa]
[individuate]
Please,next time use simpler words,it conveys your message better.
Then, […]
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writefight commented on the post, Wise Kobo, Daft Millions 1 year, 3 months ago
I like the story. You finished off in the least expected way.Good
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