Sure Ceasar,I’ll do just that.

Yeah, ‘sainted’, as in saints….It was deliberate.But scented still works,seeing that the next line has to do with the sense of smell.Thanks for reading

@clemency,I am heartened.Looking forward to read your poems too.

Thank you Boss,your words mean so much to me. Gracias.

Sure Bubbllina. Thanks for reading

@nicolebassey,thank you for reading.

I am glad you like it. @topazo. Thank you.

Thank you Emeka

You are free to have a varied opinion on a piece of work. It only reinforces the nature of artworks,to some it is a mere daub and splatter of ink,to some it is an intricate design,to yet some….it is an intricate […]

Thank you Khadijah. I am glad you like it.

Cliches cannot be totally avoided, but the less frequent they appear, the better. One good yardstick for good poems is ‘freshness in language’ Thank you once again.

Well, at first glance you have a form of paronomasia using punctuation marks, at critical scrutiny, you realise it is about accusation of a crime/judgement. Thanks for reading,@josephoguche

Keep reading,the poems is multi-layered

Thank you for reading/commenting/critiquing.
This is basically an experimental poetry form using ‘punctuation marks’ as symbolism in the theme of this work. Word play : Fun with word, pun with language to capture […]

Glad you like it. Poetry is a never ending evocation of feelings. The thrust of the message therein is hidden between the lines.

Nice story, I give it a thumb up. You may want to replace akara with ‘kosai’ [one is yoruba,the other is hausa]

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Please,next time use simpler words,it conveys your message better.

Then, […]

I like the story. You finished off in the least expected way.Good