Nice story.

Straight to the point but honestly, this was not funny.

Nice well written story. Kudos!

Thanks!

Abi! Thanks for taking the time.

Thanks a lot!

Thanks so much Da Queen. Nice name

Nice one. Well done!

Nicely and creatively written. Well done!

Haba Kaycee, you harsh o! lol. Next one go make sense, I promise. Thanks for always taking the time.

Thanks for reading. Your observation has been noted.

Interesting tale you have here.

NIce one but I think you were a bit too generous with details, especially in regard to the “suprise”.

Nice job. Next part please.

Ngwanu! Fire on

The idea of this story was cool but a little patience and detail could have made it come out better. I think it was sort of rushed, leaving out juicy details, unless if there’s a sequel. For instance, what […]

Congrats Mr. Rotimi. Send my share o!

No shaking! Please come again and again.

I think the objective of this story was well achieved. The editors can do their job later. Well done!

Definitely, there’s a sequel. Thanks for reading.

On point bro. However, some of them are different e.g my wife. *winks*

This was good stuff. Well done!

On point bro! DAMN!!!

Congrats dear!

LOL! However, I still prefer Baygon. Rambo is an old man now.

Excellent!!!

Nice one. Well done. However, watch your punctuations.

Interesting read. However, I couldn’t really grasp the essence of the story, though it was meant to be funny. I believe funny stories should also have substance.

Nice job Kaycee. Really nice job.
@Chemo: Ebi like say na you go edit my upcoming book.

The dialogue was fantastic, both the one Wale had with Ronke and the one he had with Prophdet. However, the scene inside the bus could have been much better. I think the title of the story sort of compelled you to […]