Well researched. I enjoyed reading through this.
Keep inking bro.

Really amazing piece. Keep inking bro.

Good stuff.

Good one. Would have participated but I’m already above the age limit.

Good stuff you’ve got here. Keep writing.

I so much love this story. Breath-taking piece. You should write more. It was almost like I was there.

God bless your soul for this write-up.
What about the boy child? no one seems to take note of the boy child.

Yes indeed, things have changed. Those good old days are all long gone now.

Nice piece of writing. It evokes strong memories of our childhood days.

Really cool story.

To be very honest, I didn’t quite get a word from the whole story.
It’s all jumbled up. No coherence. No plot. No twist.
Too bland. I had to force myself to read through.

You can do better. Don’t rush your […]

I just hope we realize where we are going to before it is too late.

Raw.
Watch your ‘I’s. All standing ‘I’s must be in uppercase.

Hmm. Good one, you did your bit.

Errors everywhere.
Nice plot you’ve got but you messed it up with spelling errors and grammatical errors.

Take your time to really edit your work before posting. Do not be in too much of a rush to post and at […]

John Chizoba Vincent has finally outdone himself.

deep poetry; i feel scathed.

Football and religion is long way apart.

the similarities you fished out are just normal. you can’t liken messi to daddy adeboye at all.