I’ll Be Your Friend

I can see it in you that you need to talk,

I am here for you let’s go for a walk.

l am not like others i won’t walk away,

I will be with you till your night turns day.

I will walk with you for more than a mile,

I will there when you cry and be glad if you smile.

I won’t judge you or scorn,

I will just listen till your night turns morn.

I’ve been there, i know how you feel,

Of how hurt and pain that is real.

But life never stand still, neither end,

For a broken heart will surely mend.

When you feel alone and need to talk,

I will be there  to go for a walk.

Keep one thing in mind for this is true,

I’m just a friend who cares for you.

I’ll be your friend, until the end.




9 thoughts on “I’ll Be Your Friend” by Harry Enomamien (@Silvadereal)

  1. Though some words were omitted, I`d say I love the end rhymes.

    1. Harry Enomamien (@Silvadereal)

      @innoalifa Thank you so much.

  2. Stacey (@Anastasia)

    Awwwwww…..Isn’t that just sweet?
    I was kinda enjoying the whole “statements beginning with an”i””thing….
    Nice job!keep writing!

    1. Harry Enomamien (@Silvadereal)

      @Anastasia Thanks.

  3. Iheme Nzube (@IhemeNzube)

    First, nice one. Second, it seems you began to run out of words – reason 4 some near-word-line-repetition. Third, I love the line: But life never stand still, neither end. Fourth, I will be your friend. Fifth,kudoz.

  4. Harry Enomamien (@Silvadereal)

    @IhemeNzube Thank you so much.

    Much appreciated.

  5. sultan (@Sultan)

    Nice job lad,just watch out for a few omissions @ihemenzube.

    1. Harry Enomamien (@Silvadereal)

      @Sultan Thanks.

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