Water People

Idoma- Kogi state.

WATER PEOPLE.

Ekondu’s lips quivered as he followed his friend. Alchieni pretended not to notice. The route to the river stretched into a snaky course of darkish brown mud paths and elephant grass which flanked each side of the road.

Taboo! Taboo! Taboo! Taboo!

Grandpa Ogbole’s words hovered above them. Or rather, it hovered above Ekondu. Alchieni had somehow convinced himself they’re being lied to; there were no taboos, just stupid, makebelieve stories about Water People who took the form of fishes every Wednesday.

They stood on the riverbank, watching the rippling water and the empty canoes that bobbed and swayed softly like they were babies being rocked by the Water People.

‘Are you afraid,’ Alchieni asked.

‘No,’ Ekondu lied.

*
The fish wouldn’t stop flapping.

The fishing rod trembled in Ekondu’s hands and Alchieni looked unsettled himself. This had been going on for ten minutes. Why couldn’t the stupid thing just die?

Alchieni took the paddle and clubbed the fish twice on the head. After a few spasmodic jerks, it lay still. He looked at Ekondu with triumph.

‘ Let’s go back,’ Ekondu said. ‘ We’ve caught one already.’

Alchieni shrugged and started paddling towards the riverbank. The wind slithering through the trees surrounding the river gave them voices; the sounds akin to stiffled sobbing that the boys couldn’t hear.
*
‘ Ekondu’s dying!’

His mother’s screams brought the whole village to their tiny hut. On the floor, her son was writhing, gripping his stomach in agony.

Voices spoke. Caring. Curious. Concerned voices. Village voices. ‘ What happened? What’s wrong? Did he…’

Talks stopped when Ekondu started gagging. and before the villagers, he threw up.

Screams rang from all sides and bounced off the walls of the hut.

On the floor, in a puddle of Ekondu’s vomit, the fish kept flapping.



7 thoughts on “Water People” by Farafina Boy. (@H-Rated)

  1. Well written, powerful descriptions…a flash in all ramifications. Very good job. These superstitions and cultures sha. I guess we’ve got a lot to learn about the minority tribes in our country. Thumbs up @H-RATED

  2. @Mimiadebayo, thank you, ma. You are far too kind

  3. I’m really glad I read this.
    Awesome work @H-Rated.
    Loved your descriptions. Inspiring flash.

  4. @Olajumoke, thanks loads. Let’s hope the judges think along the same lines too. Hehe

  5. Nice piece really

  6. Good story. Well done. Loved some of the descriptions. The fact that you packed three scenes into this flash without making a mess of it is commendable. Kudos.

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