Broken Heart

HeartBroken

Broken Heart
Broken Heart

 

7 years counts for nothing
So we walk
I’m a pissed off guy hurting
A green hulk

My heart bleeds
Not with blood, but with tears
My eye weeps
Not with tears but with blood

I used to love Love
Up until the moment I met her twin
And then we broke up
And I’ve been hurting ever since

Love and Heartbreak
Rum and Milkshake
Jekyll and Hyde
– rhyme from a broken mind

If this piece is not perfect
Remember life is not perfect
I used to love Love
Now I pen lines from a broken heart



34 thoughts on “HeartBroken” by Dee's hive (@dees-hive)

  1. FROM
    @dees-hive
    TO THOSE EVER HEARTBROKEN OR TO BE HEARTBROKEN – @ufuomaotebele @Afronuts @funpen @GabrielNwogu @whistlingbeautiful @oremeyi @aniefiokitong @bunmiril @Samoluexpress @namdi @justmoi @mcsnol @sarahchristy21 @olutossen @benchmark @Rachel_Williams @aihuoma @Wright08 @jefsaraurmax @olajumoke @jofiak @schatzilein @Nalongo @Pkc @charla @Tai @febidel @jayrume @kaycee @jayrume @justmoi @Olushademi @olutossen @charla @uzywhyte @samenyuch @oxymoron93 and @EfeEdosio

    feeling what you feel
    and affirming it with my soul’s seal
    I smile cause love is a burning fire
    when well-tended like is done by a seer

    I tell you though I know you already know
    it brightens and lightens your life beyond a show
    making you a king or a queen in your life’s quarters
    masquerading not as as mere counterfeit sinking litters

    Oh, history denies neither truth nor falsehood
    transferring through generations humanhood
    made or marred by love’s indelible marks or scars
    seen in lives not only on earth but also in Mars

    all said and considered beyond a passing dove
    love remains supreme and reigns high above
    greater and mightier than all feelings and emotions
    it enlivens or destroys like fast speeding motions
    #innoalifa

  2. FROM
    @dees-hive
    TO THOSE EVER HEARTBROKEN OR TO BE HEARTBROKEN – @ufuomaotebele @Afronuts @funpen @GabrielNwogu @whistlingbeautiful @oremeyi @aniefiokitong @bunmiril @Samoluexpress @namdi @justmoi @mcsnol @sarahchristy21 @olutossen @benchmark @Rachel_Williams @aihuoma @Wright08 @jefsaraurmax @olajumoke @jofiak @schatzilein @Nalongo @Pkc @charla @Tai @febidel @jayrume @kaycee @jayrume @justmoi @Olushademi @olutossen @charla @uzywhyte @samenyuch @oxymoron93 and @EfeEdosio

    feeling what you feel
    and affirming it with my soul’s seal
    I smile cause love is a burning fire
    when well-tended like is done by a seer

    I tell you though I know you already know
    it brightens and lightens your life beyond a show
    making you a king or a queen in your life’s quarters
    masquerading not as as mere counterfeit sinking litters

    Oh, history denies neither truth nor falsehood
    transferring through generations humanhood
    made or marred by love’s indelible marks or scars
    seen in lives not only on earth but also in Mars

    all said and considered beyond a passing dove
    love remains supreme and reigns high above
    greater and mightier than all feelings and emotions
    it enlivens or destroys like fast speeding motions
    #innoalifa

    1. @innoalifa …spitting bars in your lines abi…*smiles* …thanks for stopping by…its mightily appreciated and thanks for calling the firefighters to come help save the guy’s heart….

    2. @innoalifa

      Na wah for you oh…u don become advocate abi? Na you dey help @dees-hive market the post shey?

      And you’re on a roll…spitting lines in your comments. You for upload am as a post nah

      1. @Afronuts
        so true and noble a word
        I would have made it part of my world
        by making it a spitting post for the world
        in words arranged in lines like vine thoughts

        so true and noble a way
        but I’ve been vomiting every single day
        words in lines like I’m drinking whiskey
        living and spitting them as they come in the key

        so true and noble a community here
        that as the words come I spit them here
        after all, I’ve got no big ambitions or dreams
        like the sleepless man swimming in every stream

        so true and noble for poetry
        which is not marketed like lottery
        @dees-hive and @ufuomaotebele can testify
        since I can’t call all Nsians to come lay bare their minds

        so true and noble these words flow
        like honey and egg for a show
        but simply they come forth from my soul
        maybe, maybe not making an integral whole
        #innoalifa

        1. Hehehehehehehe…having a laughing saturday morning…chai…chaii…chaiii…@innaolifa is calling you @Afronuts and @ufuomaotebele and @jayrume and @schatzilein and @kwiksie to come and help you find your missing ‘heart’ (chuckling)…will you keep quiet? Chaiii…see obahiagbonic mistake afronuts has caused by calling out our shakespearan #innoalifa…the guy is badt…freestyling like no 2mao…thanks guys for stopping by…(LaffingReallyHard)

          1. @dees-hive
            laughing really hard
            has caused some poetic aches in my heart
            sorry helping myself I can’t in occasions like this
            because uninvited, words from left right and centre
            disturb me, begging me to let them have LIVES of their own

            If i can help it I will
            but it seems beyond my will
            I’m seeking assistance if there can be
            I’m only being the best way I can naturally be
            #innoalifa

        2. Err…shey you are aware that @dees-hive is a dude before you sashay into dedicated poetics over him like u did @ufuomaotebele .

          You’re definitely on a roll….i remember when I did this once too. Continue oh…I hope u don run out of Lyrical petrol….

          As for you @dees-hive ….which one be the obahiagbonic mistake wey I make oh?

          1. @Afronuts
            life is like a gruel
            mixed with a friendly fuel
            enjoyed as it tastes like no cruel

            @ufuomaotebele is just exceptional
            deserving more than what is conditional….

            1. @Afronuts so with all these poetic wahala you have caused with #inno, you no think say obahiagbonic mistake abi? the guy don reply you…him say… life is like a gruel
              mixed with a friendly fuel…what do you have to say? *laffing*
              @innoalifa and @ufuomaotebele (well done o) *i’m just saying hi to both of you guys…no ulterior motives * @Afronuts thanks for the scoops…

  3. :-( but u can still love againnnn

    1. Sure @olushademi I’m sure he’ll have a second shot…your consolations are appreciated *smiles*

  4. Hmmmm!!! okay naaahh…….guess what tho??? time heals………don’t worry you will get over it sooner or later.

    1. @ufuomaotebele nice to see you stopping by…wud def’ pass the message across. Time sure does heal…but the pain can be scathing…we all know how the guy feels don’t we?…comment appreciated.

      1. Your welcome and also we all know how girls feel too right?

        1. @ufuomaotebele …hmmmn dont ‘genderlise’ this matter o….its one of you (pointing a finger at u ufuoma) that broke his heart … lets just sympathize with the guy and leave how girls feel for now …its ‘The HeartBroken’ Club …. dont make it… a ‘Girls’Club’ ….*laffing*

          1. @dees-hive you are a guy abi?? its one of you (pointing my 5 fingers at you) that broke my heart few months ago…….abeg no pity only 4 the male gender una sabi break, destroy person heart without even knowing…………#girlsclub LOL………..this na fighting tins ooo.

            1. *wipes a tear from my eye* … what have i done to you ufuoma? i pointed just one finger at you and you have pointed 5 back….now u have put your lil finger in my eye. why shud i want to start a war that i cant win? the piece is for everyone who has been heartbroken…not just for guys *talking with a low voice* we are on the same side *winking* shebi you want the members of the #girlsclub to be on my case? aaah! i’m a friend of the club… please no fighting…sheathe your sword…if your heart was broken just a few months…i know there’s a remnant of fury i don’t want to experience. please don’t put it on me…i’m on your side *laffing* (thanks for dropping by…your comments are appreciated) @ufuomaotebele

  5. Hmmmm. Love the second verse. But, you know some folks are in love with Love.
    Nice one.

    1. @jayrume … yeps they are…its nice to have you stop by…your comments are very much appreciated.

      1. You are welcome…..

  6. s'am (@samenyuch)

    nice nice. to love is good tho. but be ready for the pain when it gets sour

    1. @samenyuch …such frankness …*smiles* thanks for dropping by.

  7. Lmao ………..eyaaa sorry jare didnt mean to blind your eyes. Okay peace offfering like my name *case closed* we cool now on the same page same line.

  8. Hi, nice poem. Do know however that love can grow again. So one day UL meet sm1 else.

    1. @funpen nice to have you bless the page with your presence…your comments are appreciated…i’m sure he’ll hear that and be consoled.

  9. A poem that serves as an outlet for healing….I’ve done many like this back in the days when I sued to get messed up in one relationship or the other…

    Keep penning those lines, its the best way to achieve healthy catharsis. A lot of the outstanding works of art came by way of cathartic constructions.

    I like it ’cause I can relate.

    1. @Afronuts
      so true and noble a way
      cathartic outpouring every day
      it heals even the mad man more than cpz does…………..

  10. @innoalifa, guy hafa na? Why you just dey try intimidate everybody with this your poetic rampage kwanu? ;)
    I mean, don’t get me wrong i love your ‘So true and noble’ flows at @afronuts and most def he and @dees-hive probably should be honored that you released them lyrics just to reply their comments oh. #wink. I’m just here thinking, we may not have any more poems to churn out by the time you’re through with us all. hehehe
    @dees-hive, first off, i see what you’re doing man. Whenever anyone comments on how they’re certain YOUR broken heart will heal soon or stuff like that, you go around saying ‘he’ like it aint really you the piece is about right?
    Hmmm, we can’t be sure oh….
    Anyway, it’s a very lovely & relateable poem. Have tried to shy away from ‘broken-heart-type writes of recent (writing them that is) because they’re just the thing to drag one into pity parties and you know how hard it is to get out of one of those. #sigh
    Failed long-term relationships are major bummers – trust me, i know – and sometimes it takes everything, plus a little jara, for one to move beyond the disappointment and not get bitter. But it is possible though.
    I talk too much. In summary, i think it’s a lovely write.
    P.s: my fave line’s the one about the ‘guy hurting – green hulk’. #shrug :)

  11. @kwiksie intimidation ke? lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :) :) :)
    reading your comment is an inspiration
    hyping my poetic passion
    as I’m smiling in obsession
    vomiting vibes
    across tides

    I have a problem
    as poetry’s stem
    seizes me
    to its tree

    making me pluck lines
    sharing them like vines
    acceptable by hearts and souls
    in love with words as an integral whole

    I’m elated you love the lines
    simply as they flow
    like a stream
    fulfilling dreams…………..

    1. @kwiksie its the part that others didnt see that you’ll sure notice…*smiling* it’s a ‘He’, abi you’ve gone psychic to know that it’s me abi? you sure know how to find wahala…(thanks for stopping by…your comments are appreciated…i will extend your thots to ‘the guy’)
      @innoalifa thanks for always adding colour to the page.
      @Afronuts your thots are really appreciated and with mentors like you…the lines def’ wud keep coming

      1. @dees-hive, no wahala finding intended. #wink

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