until

Until…

 

Deep feeling in my heart

Sorrow and I so part

I say everyday

Speaking, soliloquizing like am nuts

Emotionally it hurts

Do I stay and get slayed?

On the street, away

Destiny and reality delayed

A soul seeking help

Uncertainty known with every step

The truth blown away like Siamese

All around like touchΓ©

Hmmn! thinking about all these

Everything has no clichΓ©

Where are the men of deep thinking?

They talk away claiming to be kings

Promises my soul knows no inkling

A future before my eyes dangling

Would it one day be

Uncertainty becomes of me

 

 

 

 

 



11 thoughts on “Until…” by Elizabeth (@ElizabethII)

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    innoalifa (@innoalifa): Head Wordsmith - 297155 pts

    It appears this is your first post here… I really love this poem for it is simply enthralling… waiting to read more of your poems… πŸ™‚

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      Elizabeth (@ElizabethII): Junior Writer - 2143 pts

      Yes. Thanks a lot sir…As the lord wisheth… πŸ™‚

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    Deremi (@Jessy_deremi): Junior Writer - 4023 pts

    Lol nice

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      Elizabeth (@ElizabethII): Junior Writer - 2143 pts

      Thank you πŸ™‚

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    Kwiksie (@kwiksie): Senior Scribe - 23568 pts

    This struck me as having some pretty deep undercurrents–
    care to share your inspiration? (I think it’d help me appreciate it better.) @ELIZABETHII
    πŸ™‚

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    Elizabeth (@ElizabethII): Junior Writer - 2143 pts

    β€œEven as your body betrays you, your mind denies it.”
    ― Sara Gruen, Water for Elephants

    @kwiksie Undercurrents…somehow but i’d rather share with my poem ,else I’d be making myself vulnerable…
    Thanks for reading πŸ™‚

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    Elizabeth (@ElizabethII): Junior Writer - 2143 pts

    @kwiksie My I could be for something/someone else…being stated as such makes it more understandable.
    Thanks

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      Kwiksie (@kwiksie): Senior Scribe - 23568 pts

      Lol. Alright @ElizabethII, I hear you. We don’t want to bare it all now, do we?
      Still a nice piece though. πŸ™‚

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    O-Money (@Omoniyi-Adeshola): Senior Scribe - 28660 pts

    @ElizabethII, this reads like a spoken-word performance; do you do that stuff? Good start here, welcome.

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    Elizabeth (@ElizabethII): Junior Writer - 2143 pts

    O-Money πŸ™‚ …YES, I write *basically Rap* songs (songwriter)

    Thanks for accepting me… πŸ™‚

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    innoalifa (@innoalifa): Head Wordsmith - 297155 pts

    @ELIZABETHII,
    @Jessy_deremi & were true
    even @Omoniyi-Adeshola got the point

    your poem like a veneer
    has underlying bearings
    to commend is only best
    meant for the rarest……………………………GREAT!

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