A series: I see things others do not see (1)

A series: I see things others do not see (1)

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My name is Chuks B-. And I have the sight. Pachios has explained that I did not relinquish my spiritual eyes before being born in the earth realm. Pachios is my guardian angel. At a massive 6ft 4inches and a body filled with bulging muscles, laying a foundation for an extremely handsome but beardless face, he is quite formidable to look at- if you could see him.

Maybe I’m getting a bit ahead of myself here, maybe I should start from the beginning.

I had a perfectly normal birth, no problems to my mother whatsoever. My father was absolutely ecstatic, having a son to begin his new family with. if I could talk I guess I would have told him I would be his only issue, as I saw the gateway through my mom’s womb shut permanently immediately I came through. She wasn’t being punished or anything, it was simply what she had asked for before coming to the earth realm. Of course she wouldn’t remember it, no one did once they passed through the veil. No one that is, except special people like me. I remember it all.

The second time I used my sight was at the age of one when mum decided to get a house help to assist her in her chores and also to take care of me. As soon as she walked through the front door, all smiles and innocent-like, I saw what she was. She had barely gotten her bags unpacked before I chased after her, giggling, a fresh twig in my hand and gave that witch the flogging of her life. She screamed in agony but couldn’t explain to my parents why a small stick in my hand would cause her so much pain. After 2 more days of flogging she ran away and was never seen or heard from again .

Brb, will continue later. My boss, who has a greed demon sitting squarely on his head, is watching me. Dosent like me touching my phone while at work…



19 thoughts on “A series: I see things others do not see (1)” by royver (@royver)

  1. hi! love ur work.

  2. Great job.But i would have loved to see your parent’s reaction at flogging your baby sitter.good work anyways.
    keep writing.

  3. Nice one. Can I borrow your spiritual eyes so that I can see what you see.

  4. Wow…refreshingly sweet…

  5. Whao! Intriguing! How come its too short?

  6. Interesting start @royver.I will be looking for part 2.Last sentence; doesn’t instead of dosent.

  7. Thanks for your comments all. I’ve tried to continue the story but anytime i post it does not show up. Dunno what i am doing wrong. Can someone help me out?

  8. This was an interesting read. Can’t wait to read the rest.

  9. I love the imagination behind this piece where its going sounds promising. Hope u keep up the pace

  10. Not a bad start… Like the fact that you are trying not to make this a serious journal-like story…

  11. Really cool intro…the last paragraph made it even more realistic.
    :) @royver

  12. mendel martha (@ihenyengladysusile)

    nice read.

  13. hmmmmmmmmm…..NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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