Favourite Sin

Favourite Sin

Thoughts of my favourite sways here and there in my head
Slapping me silly and reminding me how effortless it is to fall in.
Right in my head,
I have tagged you as mine.
While am standing,
I just cant wait to fall back innit.

How fragile my heart seems,
taking charge looks impossible
Cos you’ve gat my heart consume in you.
Back and forth, you pull me back in you.
My head buzz with thoughts,
Thoughts of how to take charge

Then i realize:

I dont just fall-in
I choose it and its alot faster than i can imagine.

A knowning smile on my face
Cos i have the innate ability to get a hold of you and am set to do just
that…..



4 thoughts on “Favourite Sin” by Becca Pauls (@Becca)

  1. i like the simplicity of the language and its conversational style. i was confused at first but i later understood that it was about the will power to leave a bad addiction. well i so hate these lines especially because of their ungrammaticality:
    Cos you’ve gat my heart consume in you.
    Back and forth, you pull me back in you.
    My head buzz with thoughts,

  2. This is a nice one.

  3. i like your style, straight to the point! well done!

  4. thanks ya”all for the read. constructive criticism noted

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