Adam and Evasive

You come too soon.

I am always expecting your call, ready to come.

You come too soon.

Easy traffic; I know my way around.

You come too soon.

The urgency in your voice urges me quicker.

You come too soon.

The thought of your touch drives me wild.

You come too soon.

I miss you too much whenever we are apart.

You come too soon,
And I have another man.

(Silence)

But why?

You come too soon.

Where is your pride?

I shan’t be the bride
Unsatisfied.

But you never complianed.

I said you came too soon.

And that’s a bad thing?
I love you,
And hate to keep you waiting.

I want to wait!

But why?!

So that we can come together.

How?! You’re here. I’m there.

I want you to wait for me.

Where?!

Where you come from.

Then, why call me here?!

O, Boy!

Make sense, woman!

You…You ejac….
Spill your sp….
You spill your seed…
Too soon.

I can’t help it;
I’m an early planter.
You have another man
Because of my farming technique?
That excuse is flimsy.
The next time you call,
I shan’t come!

But, that’s what I’ve always wanted!

I should have known.
So long, then.

Yes!
At least ten minutes long!
Stay forever!

“Don’t come.” “Stay forever.”
You’re in sane!

No, in heat.

In Jos?!

Anywhere…with you.

Not with me;
Enjoy your slow planter.

Hah! Daft man!



11 thoughts on “Adam and Evasive” by Admin2 (@admin2)

  1. Lmao! Oh mehn… Crazy, nutty and I like it!
    Do you come too soon? Hope not! Lol. It’s like directing traffic innit? I like the analogies within.
    Check, Complianed – complained.
    Well done, Stag. $ß.

    1. Thanks. Glad you found it funny too. #

  2. Lmao! Oh mehn… Crazy, nutty and I like it!
    Do you come too soon? Hope not! Lol. It’s like directing traffic innit? I like the analogies within.
    Love the title.
    Check, Complianed – complained.
    Well done, Stag. $ß.

  3. Ha… Network thank you for doubling the post.
    P.S; send me a private msg if you may, I keep getting your blog when I try.

    1. Be more patient with Mr. Network.
      And about the private message, will do. Cheers.#

  4. Jo (@josephoguche)

    Still trying to figure out this poem … is it denotative or connotative?

    1. How does it get you? That’s all that matters.
      If you had to ask to get it, it wasn’t meant for you.
      Sorry.
      #

  5. Loevly one poet. I get the drill. The analogy as said bY Sybill was fantastic. “Don’t COME..”- nice pun.

    Good one portrays the nagging and unsatisfaction of a lady whose man cums too soon..lol, did I just said it?

    Hey poet, it was dramatic and witty. You employed the appropriate style by all standard…

    Keep writing! You’ve just made my come back to NS a great one. I want to read more

    1. Thank you, kind sir, for your comments.
      Keep reading.
      Welcome back.
      #

  6. Have you ever tried writing a play? You should try it.
    you are good, @HemingBird.

    Hush Hush Newbie.

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