Weightier Matters

Weightier Matters

Weightier Matters

More things to life than the frivolous

More things to amaze and astound us

The beauty and grace that abound us

The works of His hands, how marvelous

 

 

The smile of my miss, that lights my day

Her charms, her kiss, drives pain away

Her figure, her hips, not in vain they sway

The curve of her lips turns life to play

 

 

Mom and dad, and brothers no sister

Bonded by the blood they say is thicker than water

The love we share that refuses to flutter

Grateful for food and clothes and comfy shelter

 

 

Me and my friends, the teases and laughter

The times we win, the celebrations after

When times are bad, and we strive to be better

The good things of life, the things that matter



29 thoughts on “Weightier Matters” by igbor clemency (@clemency)

  1. Yeah. Life can be very beautiful and so ‘full of cheer’ if we ‘pause to stare’. If we pause to ponder on our blessings instead of anxiously counting our loses, counting the meagre amount in our bank accounts.

    Good one Black Caesar.

    1. @Hymar gracias. Yeah life is full moments so good, they dumbfound us, so it’s best we overcome the bad moods that confound us and bask in the good all around us…. Rambling

      love those lines of yours, maybe I could add them to my poem for more beauty.

  2. Not bad but this could be way more better.
    Well done

    1. @topazo, thank you, i agree to, there is always room for improvement, no matter how crowded it is

  3. We need to appreciate the small things as much as we appreciate the big things too.
    Welldone @clemency.

    1. @Olajumoke you really get the picture, thank you. Please check out my other posts, and grace them with your views, visit my author page http://www.naijastories.com/author/clemency
      Thank you.

  4. Nice one. We gotta be thankful for every little thing. Well done, Clemency. $ß.

    1. @sibbylwhyte, thank you once again for stopping by, thanks for always stopping by…
      your 2 kobo seems quite little this time, guess I impressed you.

      by the way, I envy that signature of yours, and your rank too

      €& (copycat-ing)

  5. I don’t know why sometimes half of my comments are not posted. @Ogaoga

    1. @ogaoga, abeg o, I’d love to read the other half

  6. @Ogaoga please o, wetin I do? I’ve been rewarded with just 50 points each for my posts, and the reward system hasn’t changed.

    1. @ogaoga again half of this comment was eaten

      1. The other half is: Secondly, this post appeared on the front page under editors picks, shouldn’t it be categorized under editor’s picks and appear in top stories? please rectify this. Thanks

        1. @clemency, always finish posting your comments before you publish. Nothing on the site dhould be affecting just your comments. On Editor’s Picks, only the editor can select top stories and if this was picked, it will certainly show up. You may need to clear the cache and cookies of your device to avoid these issues.

          See reward system update here http://www.naijastories.com/2011/11/naija-stories-pays-writers/

          Cheers.

  7. Good job! Well done. I thought it would be more than this anyways.

  8. @Wendy, thank you. Everybody seems to be wanting it longer tho. I added six extra lines to it in an updated draft

  9. @wendy, @topazo @hymar, based on popular demand, I’ve posted a longer edited version of this poem on my blog, please check it out.

  10. Jo (@josephoguche)

    this poem fits perfectly for a song …

  11. @josephoguche, yeah, can you sing well so I can feature you in the single… I’m glad you find my flow and rhythm appealing enough for a song.

    1. Jo (@josephoguche)

      Thanks for the offer @clemency but no.

      1. @Josephoguche I’d have to make do with Tiwa Savage then

        1. Jo (@josephoguche)

          Good idea …

          1. @Josephoguche, maybe you can help with her contacts. Only met her once and it was brief.

            1. Jo (@josephoguche)

              I wish I could …

              1. @Josephoguche, sad then, ama have to record it alone, expect clips

                1. Jo (@josephoguche)

                  Yea … Hope you dont have a cracking voice …
                  @clemency

  12. @Josephoguche mad one, it’s not just cracking, it breaks too

    1. Jo (@josephoguche)

      hahahahaha … @clemency I wish you luck

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