My Secret Angel

My Secret Angel

We’re on the rocks
Scaling stony walls together
She’s pretty in her hairlocks
I bet no one’s better.

She holds my hand longingly
Her gaze fixed on my face
Our gaze locks permanently
“I love you,” she says.

We’re a crazy pair
I know we’re unseperable
I whisper “Oh my dear,
You are so amiable.”

She smiles understandingly
And buries her head in my chest
I embrace her gladly
And say,”you’re the best”.

She laughs, telling me to stop
Her hands shaking mildly
She doesn’t mind if I grow crops
She says very gently.

It doesn’t matter if we’re farmers
Once we have ourselves
We would be such crazy lovers
Not caring for scary elves.

We’ll just be us
Me and my angel only
We might not possess an horse
But we’ll surely be happy.

I smile to myself
Telling myself I’m so lucky
Just her I shall serve
Only her shall I marry.

I hold her face in my hands
And kiss her for so long
We’re in our own fairy land
Singing our own love song.

Oh what strange peace is this!
I feel so comfortable
Yes, I’m so much at ease
Like horses in a stable.

Why; There is a loud rumble
It seems it’s a rain
It’s like I’m tumbling
But I’m on my bed again!



22 thoughts on “My Secret Angel” by praize (@praize)

  1. I love this, it has a deep meaning. Everyone deserves to be happy! Welldone!

  2. Thanks chiwendu, see ya around…

  3. It’s a sweet’ poem, praize.
    Everyone deserves such blind, trusting love, it’s only sad to note that the persona was dreaming.
    Well done. $ß.

  4. Thanks Bubblina….nd I havn’t seen any of your works recently. U don go on strike ni?

  5. Lol. I remember some me-and-my-girlfriend dreams I had in which I was the happiest man alive.

    Only to wake up and find I am the saddest

  6. Lol…the fantasy of the inner soul. Thanks for commenting, Hymar.

  7. Good one…thoughts well imagined! I was hoping for a diversion tho’.. All dsame..nice lines! Well done!

  8. Thanks 4 komenting…nd huh sori 4 disapointing u..Gräcias

  9. Lovely poem @praize, dreamy but lovely. I like the rhyme scheme, just have a little problems with some of the words used in rhyming. Good write man.

    1. Thanks Nu’rayn. I will put that into consideration. Merci

  10. Jo (@josephoguche)

    Indeed the voice of love’s peace can never be silent .. Nice one.

  11. Yeah…Joseph…thanks 4 commenting…

  12. Hmmm,interesting and very free flowing. Simple but strong enough conveying words.Nice rhyme too. I felt and flowed with it. Thank you.

  13. @praize, you make love sound so beautiful.
    I like the words you used.
    Welldone.

    1. Yeah…it just kept flowing as I wrote. Thanks for reading and commenting…

  14. Daireen (@daireenonline)

    Shebi u’ve woken up. It’s time to work that dream into a reality. Fairy tales still exist, we’re just too lazy to write them ourselves.

    Kudos man.

  15. Thanks daireen.

  16. Dream ehnm… check some of your spellings. “unseperable” lines 10, well done.

  17. Yeah…didn’t knw that was wrong. I will go check my dictionaries. Thanks 4 coming around.*winks*

  18. Mr dreamer….lol
    Nice rhymes, although some were forced.

  19. Sowie jawe. I’ll make sure I try harder next time. Thanks 4 coming around…

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