12 thoughts on “The Little death merchant” by Eldee (@codrojac)

  1. Which style is this Eldee? Twould be hard to read for people with poor sight.
    Poor little guy eh? What war have turned children to eh?
    Well done. $ß

  2. Sunshine (@nicolebassey)

    Is this original? If it is WOW!

  3. Very good poem, @codrojac. I like the choice of background image, and the way you mix the child’s innocent voice with the deadly nature of his mission.

    Well done!

  4. Are u not the one who came up with The Man-child soldier? Nice one. Gimme a 5

  5. Hmmm…nice. sad.

  6. Damn. DAMN!

    Simple. Shocking!

  7. @codrojac.This poem touched my soul.The imagery,the structure,the message.I loved the way tou used repetition to show case the poem.My best line the little death metalsfrom a little death merchant.It divided the poem in to two parts.This is the kind of poem that if a person reads it in a hundred years from now.The person will feel what you felt and see with your eyes.You are a cool poet.I feel jealous but in a good way.

  8. sorry tou is supposed to be you.

  9. nice concept….. yu got ur message across simple and plain

  10. You could have made the font larger for better visibility or rather the picture itself.

    Nice piece…deep and powerful. Brings back memories of movies like ‘Lord of War’ and ‘Johnny Mad Dog’

    I like the innovativeness…pasting the poem on the photo…makes it more vivid

  11. @kodrojac

    I echo sunshine, and say WOW!

  12. Nice concept, i agree

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