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Lookout for Miss Right- Episode Finale.

“It’s not her.” I whispered.
I heaved a huge sigh of relief.
“What do you mean, sir?” The nurse asked.
“There’s been a mistake. This is not the Florence we know.” Femi said, barely supressing the excitement in his voice.
The nurse stared at us, confused.
“Let’s get outta here.” I suggested.
And get out we did. The air was now charged with excitement. As we made our way back to the doctor’s office, I noticed our mood had taken a sudden change. We were not the same gloomy individuals that entered the mortuary. Something shone in our faces. Hope.
The doctor wasn’t in his office when we got there. We were instructed to wait for him.
He came in minutes later; the look on his face was one of worry, apprehension and embarrassment.
“I’m so sorry; there’s been a mix-up somewhere.” He began. “There were two Florence’ admitted on the same day, they both had girls. I think there was a mix-up in their files. Florence Ajah was the one who died while having her baby. Florence Andrews is the one you’re looking for. She’s alive and well. As you can see, the mistake wasn’t really our fault. Their names look so much alike, anyone was bound to mistake one for the other.”
We were too stunned with happiness to get mad at him for putting us through such trauma. Flores was alive! That was all that mattered. To us she meant different things, to Femi and Oscar she was the dearest friend they’d ever have. Even Abbey who hadn’t known her well, knew that she was a woman to reckon with and that she’d changed our lives one way or the other. To me, she was the woman of my dreams, my Miss Right…and subsequently, the woman I wanted to spend the rest of my life with!
“Take us to her, please.” I told the doctor.
“We’ll deal with you later.” Femi couldn’t resist adding.
We filed out of the office and we were led to the ward that Flores was kept. There were six other occupants in the room, Flores was the last occupant with a bed close to the wall.
She spotted us as soon as we entered, by the time we got to her bed; she was weeping. She kept saying ‘I’m sorry’ as we took turns in hugging her. Abbey took the baby from her arms as she embraced her.
I couldn’t stop staring. It had been eight months since I’d seen her but it seemed like eight years. I couldn’t seem to get enough of her. Although she looked weak and tired, she still looked good for a woman who had just had a baby.
When it was my turn to hug her; she surprised me by pulling me close and kissing me.
There were sounds of ooh’s and aah’s from behind us but we ignored them.
When we were done, she blushed sweetly and said; “I’ve dreamt of doing that for the past eight months.”
I couldn’t believe her nerve. It thrilled me.
“I missed you so much, Jake” She said again.
“Not as much as I missed you. Why did you do it, Flores?” I asked. I needed to know.
She sighed. “I couldn’t marry Fred and I needed to know that what you and I felt was much more than an attraction. I wanted to see what would happen if we didn’t see each other for a while. I thought that you’d decide to move on if you thought I was gone.”
I shook my head, speechless.
“Believe me, Jake. There wasn’t a day that went by that I didn’t want to call you. I missed you so much. Then at other times, I wanted to call Oscar or Femi to ask how you were doing but I knew they’d tell you if I called. I’m sorry.” She said.
“Umm…” Femi cleared his throat. “Before you continue with this intimate moment…can you tell us what this pretty angel’s name is?”
Flores laughed. “Her name is Nichole.”
“Wow! Beautiful name and she looks so much like you.” Abbey exclaimed.
Flores smiled. “I missed y’all so much. Oscar, I’m sorry I missed you and Abbey’s wedding. Femi, I missed your wisecracks. What are you doing these days?”
“Femi don change ooh. He is now CEO of one of his father’s companies and he has a stable girlfriend.” Oscar replied.
“Girlfriend ke? Not bed mate this time? He don repent ni?” Flores eyes widened in surprise.
“Yes ooh. The chick fine sef. And sex isn’t part of the equation.” Oscar continued.
“For now.” Femi chirped.
We all laughed. It felt good to be back. Our trio was complete.
“Guys…Oya give me space. I wanna do something I was supposed to do a long time ago.” I said.
There was silence everywhere, as I went down on one knee.
“I don’t have the ring yet, but I promise to get you one ASAP. It took me a long time to realise this but I love you. Maybe I always did, I don’t know. But right here, right now…I know that I love you and I want to spend the rest of my life with you…”
“Aren’t you forgetting someone?” Abbey asked.
I smiled. “I want you and Nichole to be a part of my life forever.”
“Is that a proposal, my love?” Flores asked with a twinkle in her eye.
“In plain terms Florence Andrews, will you marry me?”
“Isn’t there supposed to be dating, then courting before…” Femi began.
I turned to him. “Femi?”
“Yea?”
“Shut up and let her give me her answer.” I said, giving him the eye.
“Yes. I’ll marry you.” Flores said softly. “You do know I have some baggage right?”
“I still want you.” I said.
“Fred is the father of my baby and he’ll want to…”
I shut her up with a kiss.
We were married six months later in a noisy and large wedding ceremony. I’d never been happier in my life. Flores, Fred and I had worked something out about how Nichole will be raised. Although it was hard for Fred to swallow at first; we agreed to tell her the truth when she grew to understand it. She was lucky to have two fathers. My wife (feels good to call her that) and I decided we wanted our kids raised in a Christian home; we began taking God and our religion more seriously.
And that’s how it ended for us; Femi was still trying to remain faithful to his girlfriend while trying to decide whether he was ready to settle down. Oscar and Abbey had their first child two months after Flores and I were married.
All I can say is…all’s well that ends well.

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51 thoughts on “Lookout for Miss Right- Episode Finale.” by Mimiadebayo (@Mimiadebayo)

  1. Avatar of Orihime
    Orihime (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Aww, what a beautiful ending. I hope you continue writing. What am I supposed to read?

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    schatzilein (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Awwww cute….thank you so much Mimi..this was good..really enjoyed

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    kingobozy (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    **sobs** mellodramatic ending. **sobs** I always love happy endings..
    @mimiadebayo what’s next?

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    Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @Orihime Thank you so much for reading! I will definitely keep writing. Got a short story coming up…and then working on another series. Be on the lookout for them.

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    @schatzilein Thank you too for taking out time to read and comment. I appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed this.
    I’ve got something else in the works. Not really a novella this time.
    @kingobozy I’m glad you got your happy ending dear. Thanks a bunch for reading and commenting.I do appreciate. Keep your ears to the ground for my next series.

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    The-zenith (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Sobs, this is the best series eva on NS. Gbankz says so

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      Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

      @The-zenith thanks but I hardly think so. Lol.

  7. Avatar of Da'Queen
    Da'Queen (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Welldone girl.

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      Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

      @Estee thanks ma’m. I do appreciate you reading.

  8. Interesting, I am not really in to reading romance.This is nice.

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      Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

      @khadijahmuhammad thanks for reading anyways.

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    Mee (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @Mimiadebayo congrats for finally ending this, a lovely series as a whole but you know my opinion on both of them ending up together :)

    Just a couple of things like, “our trio is complete” there are four of them

    Also I think you should work a bit on expressing emotions, for people that just found out their friend/miss right was not dead heaving a sign of relief isn’t enough

    But over all i’ve really loved the series

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      Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

      @dkny111 I hear ya sir. Thanks for pointing out T̶̲̥̅̊h̶̲̥̅̊e̶̲̥̅̊ errors. I’m gonna work on expressing emotions more. Thanks for reading!

  10. Avatar of Olaedo
    Olaedo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Mimi, You know what? I was actually thinking, “All’s well that ends well” while reading, only to get to the end to see that you ended it just that way :)
    I enjoyed the series

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      Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

      @Olaedo wow! Great minds think alike,huh? Lol. Thanks for reading and enjoying it! Muchas gracias.

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    chymdiinma (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Beautiful story. Truly beautiful. I actually went back and started from start to finish this morning…and now my battery is low! Mimi u see wetin u don cause? :D Thanks for a wonderful story.

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    ablyguy (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    It was an enjoyable ride Mimi. Kudos!

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    Nira-slyves (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    How I love good endings.I enjoy dis beautiful series,I hope you write a story about fred,he is such a kul guy.., Nigerian doctors and their sily mistakes,dey dont mind killing u, if ur corpse will fetch them more money.I pray God should nt let us fall in d hands of such. Nice works mimi.

  14. Avatar of Ayoks
    Ayoks (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    nice job Mimi…sowie i ve been away. kudos! lovely story.

  15. Avatar of Izuone
    Izuone (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Hmmm, the thing ends at last happily.

  16. Avatar of Mimiadebayo
    Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @chymdiinma. Lol. Sorry about your battery dear. Thanks for taking out time to read.

  17. Avatar of Mimiadebayo
    Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @francis You made it enjoyable too,sir. Thank you for reading!

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    Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @NIRA- SLYVES Thanks so much dear.And you’re so right about Nigerian doctors. Thanks for reading till the end!

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    Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @sucess001 Long time sir! Where’ve you been? Thanks for reading!
    @Izuone yes it does. Thanks for reading!

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    sylvia (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    thank you mimi for not killing anybody. Wad a beautiful wrap.

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    topazo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Weeell, looks like u wer really in a hurry to be thru wt d series, d emotions were nt deep enough fr d circumstance.. Hw wld u feel or act if yr loved one was mistaken fr dead?

    Nice ending…

  22. Avatar of Mimiadebayo
    Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @sylvia thanks for reading and enjoying it.
    @topazo you’re right,actually. I guess I overlooked some stuff in my bid to finish up the series. Thanks anyways for reading.

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    Mimi i enjoyed d ride,thanks 4 puting up an intresting n captivating read.Looking 4ward 2 reading more great works 4rm u.Thanks 4 d happy ending,it was worth d wait.Cheers!

  24. Avatar of Mimiadebayo
    Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @jade69 thanks a lot for taking out time to read.Without people like you,there won’t be people like us. I appreciate.
    I’ll make sure 2 call on you when I post my works.

    @Olan No comment? Where u @?

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    elovepoetry (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    At last, nice finale.

  26. Avatar of Mimiadebayo
    Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @elovepoetry Yes. At last! Thanks for staying tuned.

  27. Avatar of sambright
    sambright (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    That is why you are the March featured writer.God bless you and keep writing…

  28. Avatar of Mimiadebayo
    Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @sambrightomo Lol.I think you got it wrong. I’m not March featured writer ooh. But thanks anyways for reading!

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      sambright (@): Newbie - 0 pts

      My dear, my mistake.

  29. Avatar of Olan
    Olan (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Yay! Sweet ending… Real sweet. Sigh. I’m so glad she didn’t die

  30. Avatar of Mimiadebayo
    Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @Olan Hey. Hope you’re good?Been a lil busy,I guess.Thanks for reading till the end. Mwaah!

  31. Avatar of HRS
    HRS (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Wow! I absolutely love this!!!

  32. Avatar of Feistyzee
    Feistyzee (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Perfect ending to a perfect story.I couldn’t find Episodes 28 and 29 though.

  33. Avatar of Mimiadebayo
    Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @feistyzee Welcome to the site,dear. Thanks for reading and commenting. Ep 28 and 29 are available.

  34. Avatar of Zikora
    Zikora (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Mimi the romantic! @Mimiadebayo…….well done.

    I have enjoyed the whole series. More grease to your elbow!

  35. Avatar of Mimiadebayo
    Mimiadebayo (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @Zikora Lol@ me being a romantic. Well,I guess I am. Thanks for staying thru the ride. #hugs#

  36. Avatar of MaeBee
    MaeBee (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Beautiful I’m so happy. Good job mimi

  37. Avatar of Jodeci
    Jodeci (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Blissful Ending

  38. Avatar of Jodeci
    Jodeci (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Blissful Ending

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    aniefiokitong (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    That was a big relief,but what of sonia?lol

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    aadetoyin (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Screaming and clapping!
    Good job

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    charisa (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Such a nice ending. Am glad everyone is happy after all.

  42. Avatar of itsabum
    itsabum (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    nice ending .

  43. Avatar of moi
    moi (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Strtd frm d bottom……. @mimiadebayo my best writer so far…… Kip it up….on a norms m either criticizing or lukn for flaws….she got me hooked…. wasup wif d rest of BETRAYALS AND FUNERALS Pls….m anxious…

  44. Avatar of innoalifa
    innoalifa (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @Mimiadebayo, truly, I fell for your works like I was trapped…..

  45. Avatar of Ihunanya
    Ihunanya (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    @Mimiadebayo, thanks for engaging me with this story. I will lookout for more of your works.

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