Jan 252013
Dreams the unfolding reality
Seen from an unconscious
Or subconscious reality
The summersault of dreams
Cascading from the lofty
Pinnacle of the sublime
Unleashes the reality of
The transcendental that
Propels and envelops my being
Hypnotized with hallucination
Captivating reverie transfixed
Transforming my being into
The reality of my dreams that never dies
Taking my dreams from the mirage of falsehood
Divorcing my dreams from the mirage of doubt
Engraving the reality of my dreams upon the mirror of tomorrow
The mirror of reality
Dreams the unfolding reality
Beckons bringing to my path a fulfilled
Destiny of dreams that never dies.
Nice write. I only have issues with the preponderant enjambement.
That is the free verse pattern.Thanks for the compliments.
nice write! The enjambment was excellent.
Thanks for the compliments and encouragement.
Engraving the reality of my….. I love these lines. Nice floetry.
Beautiful observation.Thanks for the compliments and encouragement.
Hmmmm… Nice one.
Thanks for the encouragement.
nice one… I enjoyed it