Dreams

Dreams

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DREAMS

Dreams the unfolding reality

Seen from an unconscious

Or subconscious reality

The summersault of dreams

 

Cascading from the lofty

Pinnacle of the sublime

Unleashes the reality of

The transcendental that

Propels and envelops my being

 

Hypnotized with hallucination

Captivating reverie transfixed

Transforming my being into

The reality of my dreams that never dies

 

Taking my dreams from the mirage of falsehood

Divorcing my dreams from the mirage of doubt

Engraving the reality of my dreams upon the mirror of tomorrow

The mirror of reality

 

Dreams the unfolding reality

Beckons bringing to my path a fulfilled

Destiny of dreams that never dies.

 

 

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9 thoughts on “Dreams” by Onen (@Onen)

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    ash the dream (@ash04): Junior Writer - 1926 pts

    Nice write. I only have issues with the preponderant enjambement.

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      Onen (@Onen): Junior Writer - 2641 pts

      That is the free verse pattern.Thanks for the compliments.

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    Basit-Jamiu (@basittjamiu): Senior Scribe - 23550 pts

    nice write! The enjambment was excellent.

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      Onen (@Onen): Junior Writer - 2641 pts

      Thanks for the compliments and encouragement.

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    DolphinEyes (@dolphineyes): Junior Writer - 2364 pts

    Engraving the reality of my….. I love these lines. Nice floetry.

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      Onen (@Onen): Junior Writer - 2641 pts

      Beautiful observation.Thanks for the compliments and encouragement.

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    Jaywriter (@jaywriter): Junior Writer - 1830 pts

    Hmmmm… Nice one.

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      Onen (@Onen): Junior Writer - 2641 pts

      Thanks for the encouragement.

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    EXCELLENCY (@excellency): Scribe - 13143 pts

    nice one… I enjoyed it

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