Beautiful rendition. Its surprising though that I only too recently read a similar epistle. It was titled HOUSE OF WAR, and if not that u do not write using big words, I could have sworn you wrote it. I can’t post it here cos its not mine, neither do I know the author to ask his permission, but am sure he wnt mind if he gets one more fan. So if you are interested in reading HOUSE OF WAR, do send me a more private address which I can use to mail it to you. Trust me when I say you NEED to see this.
though why you chose to use the title Unholy Bible i’m still not sure as im yet to see anything unholy about this. Yes God says don’t add to the Bible but this is not meant to be a Bible. either ways, it’s ur choice. I guess it’s meant to shock and draw crowd.
great so far, id love to see where you are going with this.
Doesn’t quite pack the punch the title promised. There’s nothing to shock us, nothing ‘unholy’, nothing to make us go, ‘Huhhh??? Are you kidding me?!”. You are just telling us things we already know about the devil with a few embellishments.
U want to write the devil’s memoir? Then you should really think like him and put yourself in his shoes (at d risk of losing your soul tho ) …this just scratches the surface like u are scared to go deep. If you want to pull it off, then you gotta do more than tug at it, lest this ends up as a mediocre book with an attention-seeking title.
@shadiat.
This is only pages 1 and 2 of a whole book. You don’t expect to see everything in two pages. Stories are built. You won’t have this opinion after reading the book.
Thanks for ur observation though.
The thoughts that roam though that head of yours will almost be too much for Oga Freud himself to analyse.
With all these works you churn out (fiction or not), I ‘m getting closer to seeing beyond the virtual frame of this internet interface to getting a true picture of who you are (as close as the medium allows)
Call it fiction or rambling, you are one hell of a thinker
No be small thing. Kaycee pulls it off again. honestly, it’s been a while since I visited NS but when i heard that the first Part of chapter one is out i have to come hurrying back.
Splendid as expected. Oliver wants some more, can’t get enough.
OK. I have returned. Frankly, I would have preferred if it was less humorous because I think the devil is like Pein in Naruto (if you watch that). It doesn’t have to be accurate (what is accurate?) but I would like it to make the reader question things, as blasphemous as they may be. Most Nigerians believe by default (which is not really believing but being brain washed. OK, lemme keep shut now. It’s just that I’m a skeptic of all things
Beautiful rendition. Its surprising though that I only too recently read a similar epistle. It was titled HOUSE OF WAR, and if not that u do not write using big words, I could have sworn you wrote it. I can’t post it here cos its not mine, neither do I know the author to ask his permission, but am sure he wnt mind if he gets one more fan. So if you are interested in reading HOUSE OF WAR, do send me a more private address which I can use to mail it to you. Trust me when I say you NEED to see this.
@ohmston, that would be very gracious of you.
Pls send to
kento247@yahoo.com
@ohmston. I got the mail. Thanks.
@Kaycee plz I would love your feedback on that story. Thanks.
@ohmston, I have read it. The writer is very good.
hmnn Kaycee, I’m liking this already.
though why you chose to use the title Unholy Bible i’m still not sure as im yet to see anything unholy about this. Yes God says don’t add to the Bible but this is not meant to be a Bible. either ways, it’s ur choice. I guess it’s meant to shock and draw crowd.
great so far, id love to see where you are going with this.
@funpen, read the prologue, its the blue print. And the title was just…well, something opposite to the other book.
Thanks for reading.
So you’ve decided to grace us with the subsequent chapters after a long time of posting the prologue. Nice of thee…
Still on track…
@francis, nice of thee to note. It was a WIP, couldn’t tell all.
Doesn’t quite pack the punch the title promised. There’s nothing to shock us, nothing ‘unholy’, nothing to make us go, ‘Huhhh??? Are you kidding me?!”. You are just telling us things we already know about the devil with a few embellishments.
) …this just scratches the surface like u are scared to go deep. If you want to pull it off, then you gotta do more than tug at it, lest this ends up as a mediocre book with an attention-seeking title.
U want to write the devil’s memoir? Then you should really think like him and put yourself in his shoes (at d risk of losing your soul tho
@shadiat.
This is only pages 1 and 2 of a whole book. You don’t expect to see everything in two pages. Stories are built. You won’t have this opinion after reading the book.
Thanks for ur observation though.
The thoughts that roam though that head of yours will almost be too much for Oga Freud himself to analyse.
With all these works you churn out (fiction or not), I ‘m getting closer to seeing beyond the virtual frame of this internet interface to getting a true picture of who you are (as close as the medium allows)
Call it fiction or rambling, you are one hell of a thinker
Looking forward to reading the whole book.
@midas. Thanks man.
I will have to come back to read this @kaycee.I trust this will be another best seller.*strolls off*
@sambrightomo,
Come back anytime.
Me too. Coming back to read. I hope this 20naira is a one-off payment oh. I’m Silas Marner’s cousin
No be small thing. Kaycee pulls it off again. honestly, it’s been a while since I visited NS but when i heard that the first Part of chapter one is out i have to come hurrying back.
Splendid as expected. Oliver wants some more, can’t get enough.
I wonder who you heard from?
Thanks for reading.
@louis
OK. I have returned. Frankly, I would have preferred if it was less humorous because I think the devil is like Pein in Naruto (if you watch that). It doesn’t have to be accurate (what is accurate?) but I would like it to make the reader question things, as blasphemous as they may be. Most Nigerians believe by default (which is not really believing but being brain washed. OK, lemme keep shut now. It’s just that I’m a skeptic of all things