UNHOLY BIBLE: King Lucifer’s Version (Chpt 1a) Posted by kaycee 165 views Fiction, Memoir, Novel Excerpts, Series Oct 102012 You must be logged in to access this page.Comments comments kaycee @kaycee The Free Spirit. www.kayceeuzor.wordpress.com Go to kaycee's profile, and read more of his/her posts. 19 Responses to “UNHOLY BIBLE: King Lucifer’s Version (Chpt 1a)” Ohmston Weth @ (Scribe - 19128 pts) says: October 11, 2012 at 4:53 am Beautiful rendition. Its surprising though that I only too recently read a similar epistle. It was titled HOUSE OF WAR, and if not that u do not write using big words, I could have sworn you wrote it. I can’t post it here cos its not mine, neither do I know the author to ask his permission, but am sure he wnt mind if he gets one more fan. So if you are interested in reading HOUSE OF WAR, do send me a more private address which I can use to mail it to you. Trust me when I say you NEED to see this. Log in to Reply kaycee @ (Head Wordsmith - 144306 pts) says: October 11, 2012 at 5:12 am @ohmston, that would be very gracious of you. Pls send to email@example.com Log in to Reply kaycee @ (Head Wordsmith - 144306 pts) says: October 11, 2012 at 6:13 am @ohmston. I got the mail. Thanks. Log in to Reply Ohmston Weth @ (Scribe - 19128 pts) says: October 11, 2012 at 6:49 am @Kaycee plz I would love your feedback on that story. Thanks. Log in to Reply kaycee @ (Head Wordsmith - 144306 pts) says: October 11, 2012 at 8:13 am @ohmston, I have read it. The writer is very good. Log in to Reply funpen @ (Writer - 8886 pts) says: October 11, 2012 at 5:57 am hmnn Kaycee, I’m liking this already. though why you chose to use the title Unholy Bible i’m still not sure as im yet to see anything unholy about this. Yes God says don’t add to the Bible but this is not meant to be a Bible. either ways, it’s ur choice. I guess it’s meant to shock and draw crowd. great so far, id love to see where you are going with this. Log in to Reply kaycee @ (Head Wordsmith - 144306 pts) says: October 11, 2012 at 6:30 am @funpen, read the prologue, its the blue print. And the title was just…well, something opposite to the other book. Thanks for reading. Log in to Reply ablyguy @ (Senior Scribe - 20783 pts) says: October 11, 2012 at 7:41 am So you’ve decided to grace us with the subsequent chapters after a long time of posting the prologue. Nice of thee… Still on track… Log in to Reply kaycee @ (Head Wordsmith - 144306 pts) says: October 11, 2012 at 8:16 am @francis, nice of thee to note. It was a WIP, couldn’t tell all. Log in to Reply shadiat @ (Writer - 8311 pts) says: October 13, 2012 at 1:17 am Doesn’t quite pack the punch the title promised. There’s nothing to shock us, nothing ‘unholy’, nothing to make us go, ‘Huhhh??? Are you kidding me?!”. You are just telling us things we already know about the devil with a few embellishments. U want to write the devil’s memoir? Then you should really think like him and put yourself in his shoes (at d risk of losing your soul tho ) …this just scratches the surface like u are scared to go deep. If you want to pull it off, then you gotta do more than tug at it, lest this ends up as a mediocre book with an attention-seeking title. Log in to Reply kaycee @ (Head Wordsmith - 144306 pts) says: October 13, 2012 at 1:32 am @shadiat. This is only pages 1 and 2 of a whole book. You don’t expect to see everything in two pages. Stories are built. You won’t have this opinion after reading the book. Thanks for ur observation though. Log in to Reply midas @ (Writer - 8030 pts) says: October 15, 2012 at 10:04 am The thoughts that roam though that head of yours will almost be too much for Oga Freud himself to analyse. With all these works you churn out (fiction or not), I ‘m getting closer to seeing beyond the virtual frame of this internet interface to getting a true picture of who you are (as close as the medium allows) Call it fiction or rambling, you are one hell of a thinker Looking forward to reading the whole book. Log in to Reply kaycee @ (Head Wordsmith - 144306 pts) says: October 17, 2012 at 11:08 pm @midas. Thanks man. Log in to Reply sambright @ (Head Wordsmith - 64024 pts) says: October 17, 2012 at 1:31 pm I will have to come back to read this @kaycee.I trust this will be another best seller.*strolls off* Log in to Reply kaycee @ (Head Wordsmith - 144306 pts) says: October 17, 2012 at 11:15 pm @sambrightomo, Come back anytime. Log in to Reply vescucci @ (Writer - 8988 pts) says: October 22, 2012 at 11:38 am Me too. Coming back to read. I hope this 20naira is a one-off payment oh. I’m Silas Marner’s cousin Log in to Reply lactoo @ (Writer - 6280 pts) says: October 27, 2012 at 7:52 am No be small thing. Kaycee pulls it off again. honestly, it’s been a while since I visited NS but when i heard that the first Part of chapter one is out i have to come hurrying back. Splendid as expected. Oliver wants some more, can’t get enough. Log in to Reply kaycee @ (Head Wordsmith - 144306 pts) says: October 29, 2012 at 1:33 am I wonder who you heard from? Thanks for reading. @louis Log in to Reply vescucci @ (Writer - 8988 pts) says: October 30, 2012 at 3:27 am OK. I have returned. Frankly, I would have preferred if it was less humorous because I think the devil is like Pein in Naruto (if you watch that). It doesn’t have to be accurate (what is accurate?) but I would like it to make the reader question things, as blasphemous as they may be. Most Nigerians believe by default (which is not really believing but being brain washed. OK, lemme keep shut now. It’s just that I’m a skeptic of all things Log in to Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply You must be logged in to post a comment.