Aug 182012
As with the rising morning sun
That breaks the day with light
My savior’s clouds of blue and white
Create a lovely sight
Each fresh green leaf upon a tree
Each patterned colored petal
Are showered with his morning dew
Down to the littlest detail
He makes the sun to shine
Upon the just and the unjust
The rain He makes to beat the ground
So little seed grains burst
The lovely flower fragrances
That fills the atmosphere
Are there to show the beauty
Of his presence ever near
Behold, He moves to make anew
All lives brought in a sad plight
That people who will change will have
A life as new as bright
As golden summer sun reflections
Yellow moonlight beams
As the everlasting glory
Of the star at night that gleams
Ahh this is so refreshingly sweet and comforting, heavenly and natural at the same time.
. beautiful. ( check littlest though )
Words will never be enough to describe the greatness of God.
Great poem, pal!
Good
I like this one..
Very nice poem. I like the imagery although I think ‘rising morning Sun’ is a cliche now. Do you think you crafted the last verse well? Full stops could be useful in poetry too you know.
Well done.
Splendid…
Well written.
Thanks to everyone, I haven’t been on the site for a long time, been pretty busy. All comments noted and appreciated! Was trying to write something a child might appreciate. Its actually a 10yr old poem
@ sunshine- Really appreciate u ,
@chemokopi- corrections noted