Untitled (Love Poem 17)

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Jul 282012
 

Love revolves
Round the moon
Round veneration
Transfigures faces,

veiling hearts

made up

Love revolves
Round two angered planets
Hovels green upon bastions

Love revolves
Capers in a lady’s bag
of basted straps.

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  3 Responses to “Untitled (Love Poem 17)”

  1. Avatar of kaycee
    kaycee @ says:
    July 31, 2012 at 5:17 am

    Good work, but could have been better if written clearer.

  2. Avatar of Myne
    Myne @ says:
    July 31, 2012 at 10:57 pm

    Nice one. The last two lines had me a bit confused though.

  3. Avatar of magic
    magic @ says:
    August 17, 2012 at 11:41 pm

    I think it’s a good one. Will need a Soyinka to unravel, though.

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