Untitled (Love Poem 17)

Love revolves
Round the moon
Round veneration
Transfigures faces,

veiling hearts

made up

Love revolves
Round two angered planets
Hovels green upon bastions

Love revolves
Capers in a lady’s bag
of basted straps.

3 thoughts on “Untitled (Love Poem 17)” by anonymous12 (@anonymous)

  1. Good work, but could have been better if written clearer.

  2. Nice one. The last two lines had me a bit confused though.

  3. I think it’s a good one. Will need a Soyinka to unravel, though.

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