Jul 072012
One request- so tall
Your eyes, said it all
We got into the mall
All I did was call
From behind the wall
For the attendants in the hall
Your choice wasn’t the balls
Your pick was Shawarma
I offered you banana
I crooned you some la-la-la
You said it doesn’t matter
Your hungered for Shawarma
I felt the balls again;
Hot, steamy and crunchy
You insist -Sharwarma
Now I say whatever
You will get it though
Not until mañana


Uhm… maybe I get this; maybe I don’t. Nice rhyme.
Some people will remain hungry, no matter what is offered. Nice lines…
hmmm,not quite vintage writfight.
but still interesting , keep writing.
hunger is bad -nice poem