do you really love me?

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May 312012
 

do you still love me?
I love you samson
i can hold my love.
Pls come back to me.
I love you.
Don’t tell me our love ends now.
I remember the day you kissed
me.
The day i felt your soft lips.
I want to see you samson.
You are my hearth
my breath.
Pls come back.
But do you still love me?.

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  22 Responses to “do you really love me?”

  1. Avatar of Seun-Odukoya
    Seun-Odukoya @ says:
    May 31, 2012 at 4:01 am

    Uh….okay.

  2. Avatar of chemokopi
    chemokopi @ says:
    May 31, 2012 at 4:51 am

    It’s charming in a simple way but I wouldn’t want to believe in the case of this poem that is really good. Infuse more imagery.

    Keep improving your art.

  3. Avatar of Bubbllinna
    Bubbllinna @ says:
    May 31, 2012 at 5:02 am

    Ha!..Which kain?..This is a poem too?..Keep improving..

    Hearth or heart?…If he comes back, he would shatter it.

  4. Avatar of Dotta Raphels
    Dotta Raphels @ says:
    May 31, 2012 at 8:00 am

    “I can hold my love”

    I like this quote…but where’s the rest? it ended before it began.

    Write more….

  5. Avatar of elovepoetry
    elovepoetry @ says:
    May 31, 2012 at 9:04 am

    I really love you
    And i still love ya’
    I am coming back
    To the arms i love
    To love you more!!
    Cry no more babe

  6. Avatar of sambright
    sambright @ says:
    May 31, 2012 at 9:11 am

    JULIET BABY OKAY…JUST CHECK THE SPELLING ERRORS AND KEEP WRITING!

  7. Avatar of Afronuts
    Afronuts @ says:
    May 31, 2012 at 9:30 am

    I’m confused.
    This looks like an abuse of poetic license.

  8. Avatar of Sunshine
    Sunshine @ says:
    May 31, 2012 at 2:21 pm

    Left me longing for more…

  9. Avatar of ostar
    ostar @ says:
    May 31, 2012 at 2:55 pm

    Was she flaking away, smiling?

  10. Avatar of Myne
    Myne @ says:
    May 31, 2012 at 3:32 pm

    A bit too simplistic but I see it as personal poetry and so appreciate it as such.

  11. Avatar of Ayodeji Lancaster
    Ayodeji Lancaster @ says:
    June 1, 2012 at 5:17 am

    Personal poetry I believe this is. Well, I like it, no matter how brief and simple it is. This is what some of us have hidden away in our hearts untold.

    Keep writing…

  12. Avatar of kaycee
    kaycee @ says:
    June 1, 2012 at 10:17 am

    Keep reading, and writing.

  13. Avatar of mikeeffa
    mikeeffa @ says:
    June 8, 2012 at 4:21 am

    i doff my hat for your creativity, courage- well done

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