Bubbllinna

Bubbllinna

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, Verses for Hubby 6 years ago

    This is good and sexy, Topaz. If you’ve got a good voice, read it out slowly just before you turn off the lights.

    Check. It’s effect and it’s fruit should be ‘its’.
    Well done, Topaz. $ß.

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, For my friend 6 years ago

    Oh my. I am sorry bout your loss, Saba and I do pray that all those who he left behind would find comfort in the fact, that he does rest in peace.
    It’s friendship like yours that stand the test of time and show […]

  • Haha! Oh, my secondary school days. Once we had a passerby come into school to report that he had been baptized by feaces thrown shotputally. School had to repair our toilets by force.

    Better shotput than […]

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, Ness (the Mess) 6 years ago

    Hilarious! The flat-nyashed teacher and the pinkie-dick HOD sure made me laugh.
    This was funny Levus, and I wish you had taken your time. The dream slant would have helped töo. I will check for the next, better […]

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, Flame of honesty 6 years ago

    I like the father’s ghost twist to the honesty is the best policy story.
    Reread and take care of typos.
    Well done, Ajeni.

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, Letter from beyond 6 years ago

    Yeah, if only letters came from beyond, there would be less sin in the world.
    It’s a cool concept but you have to edit the piece, bunmi pointed out a few. Read this aloud, and more typos would jump out at you. […]

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, Gaga? 6 years ago

    There is potential in this, it just needs you to take your time with it. That you titled it gaga doesn’t mean we should go gaga as details rush at us like whirlwinds and toss us up and down.
    Go through this, […]

  • Nice.
    While I get that the ‘Tom’ might be a cat or dog, it would be better if you made that clear before someone thinks Tom is a gay dude. The errors have been pointed out, have them cleaned out.
    Well done, Unen.

  • Your tale of twisted misfortune huh? This tale was a misfortune and its twists were made worse by the fact that you assaulted our senses with clumsy writing.
    I read more than half and browsed through the rest. […]

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, Osaki Ibiba 6 years ago

    This was cool, Osaki is a manipulator. He goaded Mase into battering the lady, so he would drop out of the race. I however think that the last line should have been of people cheering, oblivious that the sole […]

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, Winter's Choice 6 years ago

    @newreign.
    Aww, this was sweet yet sad. I hope she gives the middle finger to societal all-what-not and share in the happiness you both ought to have.
    You are a poet and it shows. I wanna write like you when I […]

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, Why Her? 6 years ago

    *Mumbles incantations and clinks cowries onto the ground*

    Ifa says, she’s got the best ass and comliest face in the land, and he needs a new wife. Would you question a god’s choice? He takes what he deems fit. […]

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, christmas rhymes 6 years ago

    @topazo.
    Nice christmasy one, Topaz. I like the laid-back rhymes. I spent christmas in a prayermarathon, shey na me celebrate am pass ni? Hehe.

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, The Rush 3 6 years ago

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, The Rush 3 6 years ago

    If it can peel paint, your body suppose peel join. Come, your landlord sure has a weird sense of humour, in public bathrooms that are covered by zinc sheets, you’d never find a shower, if you do, it rarely works […]

  • Bubbllinna commented on the post, seductress 6 years ago

    There are lasting lessons learnt to be learnt from this piece. I especially enjoyed the sprinkling of literary devices and the poetic feel..
    Check, laziness not lasiness. Laziness is quite the temptress or […]

  • I like the poetic narrative and the fact that it flips the gender in the proposal.
    Some words were misspelt. Furry – fury, scenerio – scenario, paparatzi – paparazzi. Check ’em.
    Well done, Lekan.

  • This is Awkward raised to a power of infinity. Well, let your MC pray that the women are gullible like they usually make them out to be in movies, so they can stop to listen or storm out.
    Weirdone, you delivered […]

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