@ufuomaotebele, you dey talk tory jare! Honestly, i haven’t enjoyed many stories online as I have yours. @afronuts was right, your narration makes up for errors in spelling, punctuations and tagging. But […]
Too bad I’m late to the party. Most others have pointed out issues, so I won’t bore you to deaths. Details, tenses, word order are points you can work on. As for POV, the hard part is sticking to it and keeping it […]
Cheating, thieving husband. Really pants down. However, I hope the gun doesn’t kill him in one shot. A little wound in a choice part of his anatomy and months of painful recovery from an injury he can’t explain or […]
@@sibbylwhyte, this ficterview is just the sort of “fictional interview” I wish were real sometimes. In fact, it is so surreal it is real. It takes all sorts to make a world, and more often than not, we don’t see […]
@mimiadebayo, there should be something more to this “Mo-ron” than meets the eye. Yeah, he’s a guy, yeah, but he’s supposedly hopped up on guilt and giving into a bout of “painstaking” sex with his grieving wife? […]
This is quite good. I did not know what to expect, but I was not disappointed. It has both a betrayal and a funeral in a single instalment.
While you cannot be killed @mimiadebayo, there are a few things I would […]
@hymar@mimiadebayo it isn’t that I don’t comment on people’s works. I love to but most times I make the mistake of comparing them to me and that misses the mark cos of course everyone has a different writing […]