You have a good story here @gmoney. The conflict is ‘tight’. I like that you have made both father and son likeable.
But you have a lot of work to do with your narrative, I hope you don’t mind me going through […]
She just ‘wants to stay close to the story’ @schatzilein.
I don’t even think people like are know they are catering to their ‘need to know’ not caring when they do that.
Thanks for commenting as usual.
Episode 50 @gmoney? Haba!
This one finishes in a few days, lol. One more and that’s it.
Thanks for the vote anyway. You are too kind.
Sorry it has taken me so long but I will give you a feedback about your work […]
I will always marvel at that ‘ bond’… mothers have with their children that enables them to share their pain etc. I know this isn’t always the case and other caregivers like fathers, step parents and adoptive […]
You need some reprieve @jefsaraurmax? Looks like I’m going to have to learn how to craft rom-coms or straight comedies, lol.
I’m working on light hearted drafts at the moment.
Thanks for following and the comments.
I agree @roy-journals, she doesn’t need validation from any man.
Although one can still argue that she has always put her children first and what happened still happened.
Perhaps she needs to choose a religious […]