You are a good writer.

Look at these:
1. I liked the quip about marrying the woman of reality. Hahaha.

2. Good story. Would have been good to explore it deeper and resolve it. What kind of love can be […]

The idea of anonymous judgement is really cool.

Layrite, I’ve read your prose before now. I still remember that Mafia-style crime story, and, of course, the football story (which I particularly enjoyed).
In KTM, you adopted a form that could work as both […]

Up there, presiding over the stack of old newspapers on the shelf, hangs what he calls “my oga at the top”. He plants one leg on the window sill and heaves his weight – which is quite negligent, compared to his […]

Hahaha. I love this flash.

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Thanks.

I like the boldness. Thumbs up.

Ooooh! Why you come spoil this thing with typo na?… :-/ This is a compelling read. Seriously. Well done. :)

I LOVE this, Fiyin! Well done. Like the way the story marched gallantly forward, no dulling.

I like this story. Though it would have done better without clichés. Also, you didn’t explain why they didnt go 4 antiretrovirals.
OVERALL? Good story. G’luck mate.

Hmm. Nice, @kaycee. Praying you make it to the longlist though. Just the longlist! :-/

Let the show begin!

Wished you had explored your theme deeper and left off the preachiness at the end.
A few typos…

‘…dark night.’ States the obvious.

Still, a very relatable and interesting story. Well done @topazo. :-)

Nice one, Chika