@samodbiobaku, I understand your concept now after that explanation. Without it we just assume it’s an oversight and offered the critical review.
Ps, I believe I’ve seen a toolbar for centralisation and other […]

Very nice. The president bit was quite a lot of info while my head tried to reconcile the previous stories.
I applaud thou, waiting for the rest of it. Cheers

@wordsfromuyi
Nice, so much info though. Maybe subsequent editions would concentrate on a pov and allow for clearer understanding.
You know how to write. Well done

Ps If I’m not mistaken, bulls technically […]

@silvadereal nice story continuing from where you stopped.
Did you write in a hurry though? You missed a couple of punctuation and I assume Julie meant to say “…I will NOT tell you how to live…”.
Looking […]

@hotchocolate @musemussang. It very hard to tell a psycho girl from looks. In my comment below I mentioned it, she basically blackmailed into a relationship by threatening suicide. It was very tough to deal with. […]

Great story, great writing.

I know a girl like this. Paranoid after seeing a game character on my xbox, glad to be rid to say the least…

Nice story @banjidanny
In addition to namdi’s comments:
You also forgot to add Some words eg “…wondered if this was still dancing..”

You used bribe instead of bride couple of times…also similar errors […]

By the way @folakemi, the babies, you said shehu was a split image of Sule…this means they are dizygotic? Was just an interesting bit specific detail, made me wonder

It’s so easy reading your stories, one can feel the words @folakemi, so good.
I’m a guy but I knew of vvf, it’s a pity really when a woman goes through labour only to contend with more issues as this. Sadly this […]

lol, @ufuomaotebele, yea in person is best but like Pearl pointed out, chances are you may get physical. I once broke up with an ex 4 times(2 times by me and twice by her) because we got physical and made up […]

Flawless. Hope you share the rest @lordjosh

@namdi, though I read all of it, I agree with you. Lack of punctuation and arrangement of sentences made this a struggle to read @samodbiobaku. However it was descriptive and funny, I wonder about the young bobo sha lol

@folakemi, you’ve outdone yourself. I liked this, it had a nice flow and I could feel it. Well done.

Well, take time editing and perhaps add a paragraph or two next time. Cheers

Good read. Chuckled at oga Jimmy’s expected behaviour. Kids.
I know this is a non-fiction narrative but just a couple of pointers… if you use a word processor, check that it doesn’t autocorrect things you don’t […]

Lol @ufuomaotebele why Chinedu though?
A rabbit is an acceptable pet, sold in pet stores and all. But goats, chickens and snails? Dunno, seems like strange pet choices as they are daily food for man

Well done…it is a good story. I’m keen to know how it plays out

Nicely done