Love Lust

Today, I was lost
Thinking about us
when we were in love
Before it turned to dust

How did we loose it
Weren’t we the ones who chose it
Now, we just see it
But can’t feel it.

My heart still beats
Probably for you
But unsure of you

Hello, I called
Hello, I called again
Hello, I screamed
Trying to call you back to me
But you had gone with the stream

My head has being hurt
My mind has being bruised
And my heart, left thumping in darkness

6 thoughts on “Love Lust” by Adesanya Oluwadamilola (@McDahmie)

  1. HISPLATFORMID (@Mikeal)

    Great piece!

    1. Adesanya Oluwadamilola (@McDahmie)

      thanks @mikeal

      glad you appreciate it

  2. Felicia Taave (@FeliciaTaave)

    Wow! So powerful…the pain is so palpable

    1. Adesanya Oluwadamilola (@McDahmie)

      thanks @FeliciaTaave

      am glad you were PALPABLED by the emotions I was able to deposit in this piece

  3. Ezeama Chijioke Desmond (@Chijy)

    Good one. But then, in the last verse it should be ‘been’ and not ‘being’

    -my head has been…
    -my mind has been…

    keep writing.

  4. Oloruntoba Yetunde (@Olushademi)

    Easy to understand and nice! :)

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