Today, I was lost
Thinking about us
when we were in love
Before it turned to dust
How did we loose it
Weren’t we the ones who chose it
Now, we just see it
But can’t feel it.
My heart still beats
Probably for you
But unsure of you
Hello, I called
Hello, I called again
Hello, I screamed
Trying to call you back to me
But you had gone with the stream
My head has being hurt
My mind has being bruised
And my heart, left thumping in darkness
Great piece!
thanks @mikeal
glad you appreciate it
Wow! So powerful…the pain is so palpable
thanks @FeliciaTaave
am glad you were PALPABLED by the emotions I was able to deposit in this piece
Good one. But then, in the last verse it should be ‘been’ and not ‘being’
-my head has been…
-my mind has been…
keep writing.
Easy to understand and nice! :)