My wife of Life & for Life
My sunshine & Moonlight
My bride, yes my pride
For whom on my face lingers dancing smiles
With you worries fade
Like the shores washed away by waves
See, with you arising in me’s faith
Casting away every shame,pain and ache
For you again I love
Cos of you again I believe in love
Every doubt’s forever hushed
By the very fiber of your love
Like the chest rises and falls
And the tic-tac of a clock
every rhythm of my heart as it taps and thunders
Silently whispers, whispers of love…
Whispers so loud can you hear?
Whispers so bright can you see?
Whispers so sweet can you smell?
Whispers so true can you know & feel?
Ssshhh! Sssshhh!! Silent Whispers of love… Shhhhh!!!

Lovely. Work more on using each line to paint a picture.
Good work.
@ufuomaotebele Thank you so much. Points noted.
Not every man has the time to praise his wife as much. Nice piece (Y)
@ugochuckwu Many thanks, Im very grateful.