My Rumblings

My Rumblings

Ungrateful heart
the reason we take others for granted.

the reason we think we can eat our cake and still have it.

the reason Lucifer fell;the reason we will fail.

we pray for what we want and wish for what we don’t want
the reason for turmoil.

the reason every whisper sounds like a name.

the reason we can never see anything good in our choice of focus.

the reason there is hate.

the reason we have smiles.

the reason we are human.

the reason we are alive.

the reason there is no trust.

we all want it but can’t give it.

the reason there will always be lies
how many really wanna know the truth?

we dish it generously; we refuse it vehemently.

the reason there’s two staying one.

we all talk the talk but we hate the walk.

My rumblings
the reason am sane.

8 thoughts on “My Rumblings” by rosy (@Rosey)

  1. Ufuoma Otebele (@ufuomaotebele)

    WOW the very last statement blew my mind. “My rumblings, the reason I’m still sane.”

    I can’t express how much I loved this. Allow me call this crew to express their thoughts @Ivie9ja @ameenaedrees @anakadrian

    Happy New Year in advance!

    1. anak adrian (@anakadrian)

      Yes. That was quite a meaningful line, and a sweet ending.

    2. Oh this is really nice, I love it, I must thank @ufuomaotebele for calling me.
      Nice work.

  2. Thanks Ufuoma. looking forward to reading other comments.

    1. anak adrian (@anakadrian)

      This poem was just nice. You described basic situations of the human condition in a splendid way.

      Now, just to nit-pick. Did you mean “rumblings” or “ramblings”

  3. thank you Anak. i actually meant rumblings to mean ‘Pervasive, widespread expression of dissatisfaction’ and plus i like the sound of it. lol

    1. anak adrian (@anakadrian)

      Nice. I like the way you think.

  4. ivie9ja (@Ivie9ja)

    Ok I was going to ask the same whether you meant rumblings or ramblings. I like this its like a brief analysis of life itself of the things good and bad that make us human. Nice one. Thanx @Ufuomaotebele for the recommendation

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