I pray for once, to hold you
I tried for long, to feel you
I waited a while, to see you
And now, I stand waiting on you

She cried so loud, I prayed
She screamed so hard, I eyed
She called me a million times, I begged
She stood then walked, I followed

He came to ask, I answered
He touched her round, I wondered
He called for her, I searched
He said it is now, I quivered

They took her in, kneeled
They laid her down, I shivered
They spoke in silence, I panicked
They brought you out…

Just then I watched you cry.

8 thoughts on “JUST THEN, I Watched YOU CRY” by Gabi (@Gabi)

  1. anak adrian (@anakadrian)

    Awww… This was nice.

    1. Mr. Inetanbor (@Gabi)

      Ooh Thanks,
      It was a joyous moment to watch him cry for the first time……….My son!!!

      Thanks Anak

  2. Ufuoma Otebele (@ufuomaotebele)


    1. Mr. Inetanbor (@Gabi)

      Yes @ufuomaotebele!

      I felt the same way!

  3. Kosnie (@Kosnie)

    Nice piece and congrats @Gabi

    1. Mr. Inetanbor (@Gabi)

      Kosnie! where have you being?

      Missed your comment!

      Thanks very much and nice to have you drop by.

      1. Kosnie (@Kosnie)

        Been very busy @Gabi esp as de year draws to an end with various deadlines to meet

  4. Wow! Congrats dear

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