My Pains

My Pains

At the most lonely time
At the most saddest period
At my most bordered hour
Sorrows of a broken love
Iā€™m thinking it to be
Just a try from a long stop
My greatest precedent
I joined angelica roses
My big enchilada emerges
-Out of the clouds

An enigma like the bride of Barbados
Will it last long a life time
maybe just a little longer
a reason out of too many
will I be led by the nose
Maybe helping a damsel in distress

Once bitten twice shy
One day killing all, the past.
One kiss took leaving a memory of the past
the felling that will never be forgotten
One face out in a many-million
-As the beauty of the roses

a step to death direction
-the first step to death
All of my pain with that step
Now you illume all memories
Instead of all of my pains
-Stand the replica

That will keep running through memories
Memories of all my pains

7 thoughts on “My Pains” by Gabi (@Gabi)

  1. Ufuoma Otebele (@ufuomaotebele)

    Lovely… the pain of love, its a quick yet slow death….

    1. Mr. Inetanbor (@Gabi)

      Yeah @ufuomaotebele, you can say that again! then you can imagine how many life I have….lol

      Thanks for dropping by and your commences.

  2. anak adrian (@anakadrian)

    That sista above has beaten me to it.

    Yes, the poem speaks for itself.
    Love and pain be twinning since the stone age.

    Nice one.

    1. Mr. Inetanbor (@Gabi)

      Indeed @anakadrian, you can see the various battles it wages on different individuals……. some will stop at nothing until they find it and other don’t care and they ask what do you mean?…

      Thanks has always @anakadrian.

  3. Kosnie (@Kosnie)

    Hmmmm memories

  4. rosy (@Rosey)

    memories of all my pain! hmmmm

    1. Mr. Inetanbor (@Gabi)

      yeahhh…….Memories of all my pain!!!!
      @rosey, Thanks for dropping by!

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