Unfulfilled Promises – 1


“Your sweetheart is coming.” Edward Chianumba announced to his friend, Eric Conrad.

Eric looked up from the game he was playing on his phone and smiled. Indeed, his sweetheart was coming. His sunshine; his best friend.

He didn’t quite know when or how but he knew he had fallen irresistibly in love with her. Anyway, who wouldn’t fall in love with such a wonderful person like Oleng?

He continued watching her intently as she approached them along with her friend, Ezinne Uzoma. She looked good as usual in their unique uniform of burberry skirt, white shirt and black tie. He felt his heart beat faster than normal as it usually did when she was around him.

“As I was saying, Kemi is my latest target. Men! If I don’t get that girl, I might die….Eric…Eric…Here we go again!” Edward complained when he realized his friend was no longer listening to him but looking steadily at his approaching childhood sweetheart with a stupid smile on his face.

He wondered at the kind of love between these two and also wondered if he would ever love like this. As he stared at his friend, he was surprised to see Eric suddenly frowning. He followed the direction of his gaze and smiled mischievously. Uche, their classmate had stopped Oleng for a chat.

Eric tried to control himself because he felt like going over there to warn Uche to stay away from his girl. He shook his head. Oleng was not his girl. After all, he had not made his feelings known to her or asked her to be his girlfriend. Everyone knew they were the best of friends and have been friends since he was six and she, five and now they were sixteen and fifteen years old respectively. They had come a long way together.

He couldn’t pinpoint exactly when he had started developing feelings of love towards her. At his study time, when he was supposed to be reading, thoughts of her always infiltrated his mind. He would stare at her photograph over and over again. He dare not tell her of his feelings lest he ruin their friendship. He didn’t know if she felt the same way towards him. Looking at the way she was smiling at Uche made him think his love wasn’t reciprocated. It made him sad.

Ezinne who had been looking at Uche disdainfully left them and walked towards where he and Edward were sitting on the bench. Ezinne, Oleng’s closest female friend was a very slim black beauty with a sharp wit. She usually didn’t mince words when it came to saying her mind but she was a very loyal person.

“Hi Eric, hi Eddy.” she hailed when she got to them.

“Hi, Zinny.” Eddy hailed also.

“Hi to you too, Zinny.” Eric greeted as she sat down beside him on the bench to look at Oleng and Uche still chatting.

“Eric, you should tell Oleng to stop pretending and start showing her true feelings.” Ezinne said angrily.

Eric was surprised. “What do you mean?”

“She isn’t enjoying that conversation. She’s just too polite to tell him she’s tired. She’s like that with every guy who approaches her. Sometimes, she is so nice, I feel like killing her.” she complained bitterly.

“Come on, Ezinne. Oleng is a very beautiful girl. She should enjoy the advances made towards her.” Eric countered.

“Not when she’s got you. You’re the guy in her life so others should just get the message.” Zinny replied impatiently.

“Zinny, are you saying this out of jealousy, since they all approach her and none spare you even a glance?” Edward quipped with a smile.

Ezinne glared at him. “Eddy, if you weren’t my senior in class, I would have bitten you right now for that nonsense you just said.”

Edward smiled in a charming manner.

“You can bite me anytime, Ezi mummy,” he chuckled. “But you know where.”

“God! You’re incorrigible!” she exclaimed in disgust, making the boys laugh.

Edward was a notable flirt. He was tall, dark, handsome and charming. At just sixteen, he used his good looks and honey coated tongue to win girls and sleep with them. He saw himself as God’s gift to women.

21 thoughts on “Unfulfilled Promises – 1” by AudreyTimms (@AudreyTimms)

  1. This story has spurts of potentials and I certainly will be doing myself some good by following it.

    Nice nice start :)

    1. AudreyTimms (@AudreyTimms)

      Tanx @innoalifa. Dts all d encouragement I nid 2 continue writing

      1. @AudreyTimms, you’re always always welcome…inviting you to check out my story at http://www.naijastories.com/2014/08/boss-wife-episode-10/ and comment, good or bad.

        1. AudreyTimms (@AudreyTimms)

          I’ll sure follow and comment. I hv an embarrassing question though. Hw do I continue my story? I min where and how exactly do I post d continuation of my story? Hvnt sin anywhere 2 do dt. Tanx

  2. ufuoma otebele (@ufuomaotebele)

    Oh wow just what I needed. I’m hoping by the end of this series, I can resolve my own situation too.

    I love how short nd sweet this first part was. I’m ready to see how this young love fever unfold.

    Great job!

    1. Ufuoma darling whats ur own situation….please spill some tea..wink*

      1. ufuoma otebele (@ufuomaotebele)

        @schatzilein Lol…. whats this story about?? no be 2 friends, one no fit tell the other person say they might be catching feelings for the other becuase of the so called friendship thingy…. so my sister, thats my P right now oo…

        1. My dear life is too short to slack…summon courage yarn the guy…if him no feel sameting okay…move on..wasnt meant to be…if the friendship is real and genuine such thing no fit spoil am…dont be among those HAD I KNOW in a few years people..

          Or you fit employ me tell am nah lolz

          1. ufuoma otebele (@ufuomaotebele)

            Hahaaaha oh my!! If I employ you, u go do pass the drama I make in my series….. make we leave the boy when his back to his senses he go hala at me.

    2. AudreyTimms (@AudreyTimms)

      Tanx @ufuoma. Rily? I hpe I dnt disappoint u sha. *kipin ma fingers crossed*

  3. Ihunanya (@LONE)

    l love this too!!! Following.

    1. AudreyTimms (@AudreyTimms)

      Tanx @ihunanya. Pls kip following

  4. I like already

    1. AudreyTimms (@AudreyTimms)

      Tanx @schatzilein. Pls kip following

  5. Lovely story, definitely following.
    @ufuomaotebele no wait o, life is actually too short as @schatzilein said, sometimes you have to take your own destiny into your hands.
    All the best.

  6. Ugochukwu (@Ugochuckwu)

    Hmmm…….girls and romance, #nawaoohh lol @ameenaedrees @schatzilein @LONE @ufuomaotebele
    Nice Intro tho

    1. We all need a lil bit of romance in our lives na…

  7. Lol..teenagers doing there thing. nice story

  8. Following. I don’t want to believe this is the (short) end of Chapter One, though :D

  9. kay (@kaymillion)

    following to the end………

  10. lol!! nice!!! I could just picture the whole story as I read on. Sharp vivid imagery being painted. Keep it up

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