PINK AFFECTIONS: In the Dormitory’s Bathroom

The first time I kissed Kelechi it was unintentional. I’m not saying I did not like it eventually, but she made me do it. All the sweet words she whispered in my ears made her hips so adorable and desirable. After I kissed her, she smiled, and I knew she liked it too. She took my hands in hers and I giggled like a baby, not because of the kiss, but the way she held my hand tickled me. Her palms brushed against mine and sent shock waves, pleasurable shock waves up my spine. She moved closer and leaned forward, her lips headed for mine; I sat still and shut my eyes expectantly.

It seemed like forever in that moment, but it came, her lips touched mine and we kissed again. She held me tightly and I nearly melted in her grip like wax in burning light. Her long, thin fingers tracing Arabian-like patterns all over my body; my back, my stomach and the small of my back. As she unclasped my bra I thought my heart had suddenly been exposed, the way it beat so fast behind hardened nipples and firm breasts.

“That’s right!” I thought I heard myself say. I was heaving and moaning softly now, then I heard the words again, but they weren’t coming from me.

“Lights out!” The loud, terrible voice of Senior Adanna, the hostel prefect came ringing in the distance. She was actually a few feet away from the door of the room I and Chioma were in. We were not quite in a room, we were in one of the dormitory’s bathroom and we both were aware of the consequence of being caught outside our rooms after lights out has been called.

A moment before we were on our way to the moon, but rushed back to earth by Senior Adanna’s voice and steps fast approaching our spot.
In that moment it was not really fear that gripped us; it was a heightened sense of things. We knew for sure that if we got caught in that place, at that time, and together, we were dead meat.

19 thoughts on “PINK AFFECTIONS: In the Dormitory’s Bathroom” by Scopeman (@scopeman60)

  1. nice but how come kelechi’s name suddenly became chioma

    1. @sarah Dang! Silly me!! *shy face*

  2. Nalongo (@Nalongo)


  3. kay (@kaymillion)

    nice flow

  4. mendel martha (@ihenyengladysusile)

    nice piece…

  5. Efe Edosio (@EfeEdosio)

    Nicely done.
    I’m guessing ‘hips’ should be ‘lips’

    1. @EfeEdosio Yeah, you’re right, thanks!

  6. Kelechi-chioma???

    Dont gerrit..nice try tho

    1. @schatzilein That has been noted already, but thanks still…

  7. P.J. Burre (@olutossen)

    see what hostel life has caused…

    1. @olutossen How do you mean “what hostel life has caused” please?

  8. P.J. Burre (@olutossen)

    @scopeman… just saying its one of those things that happen in a hostel full of girls these days. your detailed description is awesome!

  9. Nice read but u really should take more time to edit.

  10. Ihunanya (@LONE)

    Just like @olutossen said, one of the things you see in the girls’ dormitory. Lovely.

  11. You’ve been pointed out on d mistake and why you should re read several times before submitting.

    I however knew where you were headed from the first line. So i guess what id love to see is a story that doesnt feel familiar. You already know how to write, thumbs up just brush up on editing and seek newer subjects of matter.

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