It Wasn’t Me (part 4)

It Wasn’t Me (part 4)

Idiot, you stupid fool how dumb can you get you dumb old man, you just couldn’t wait, you wanted a child that bad that you brought your dumb nephew to the city now look what he has done are you happy now. Honey calm down, it’s not that big of a problem,  not that big are you seriously listening to yourself, your nephew killed someone and it’s not a big deal, chi wonders shall never end, someone is dead because of your stupid nephew and your sitting here saying all of this. Look sweetheart I spoke to my nephew at the police station and he says he didn’t do it, and you believe him, you believe that village he-goat, i told you not to bring him but you didn’t listen now look at yourself can you see the big mess you have put yourself in, and what  were you doing so close to the police station in the first place the only thing near that station is an hotel. I was meeting up with my boss, your boss wow u fit find lie pass that one na your oga you con put for you lie now, why can’t you just tell the truth you have started again, you have started sleeping with those cheep jobless hiv carrying harlots. the day I will catch you with one of them, if i don’t killed you and that girl, call your dog to bite me.  God I still can’t believe this , believe what that my nephew killed someone or that I found a woman out there better than you.

4 thoughts on “It Wasn’t Me (part 4)” by nigerianteen (@mimi)

  1. punctuation issues

  2. ufuoma otebele (@ufuomaotebele)

    Your dialogs needs more work espcially with punctuations. Anyway, i get the story even my lil sis is into it.

  3. ufuoma otebele (@ufuomaotebele)

    @mimi To be honest, i had to come back because this reminded me of myself few months ago when i first started typing my stories into word document. In fact, you would think it was an eassy filled with run on sentences and i was confused on where to add commas. The thing is you got the idea like i did all thats remaining the structure. How you format it. Get better on that and you would be very fine. Hope this helped.

  4. Nalongo (@Nalongo)

    Make the suggested corrections.

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