Watching your body drift
Across the blue hue
The sounds of the crickets
Chirping noises leaping into my reddened ears
As the birds fly back to your warmth
I see your shape: life full
Your eyes closed in a state of quiescence
Watching you as you undress
Your form: divine and crescent
Thick scents you bring with you
from the deep ends of the savannah
Welcoming all of us, you dare to find air
Yes, I see you
In all your dappled yellow glory
Yes, I see you with my evening by your side
…a beautiful retelling a beautiful experience… nice!
Good one.
Nice
I like this…
I like the subjectivity;
I like the universality;
I like the objectivity;
Of the this experience you didn’t keep to yourself.