Forever And A Day

Forever And A Day

When I first saw you
Like the moon newly born
The aura exuded by you
Melted my heart of stone
I felt no longer same
As a new peace upon me came.

When I first spoke to you
Like a sinner to an angel
I felt being washed anew
Like a soul saved from hell
I felt no longer same
As upon me a new peace came.

When I first heard your voice
Like angels singing God’s praise
When I first heard you talk
I felt relieved of a bulk
I was trapped by your charm
Feeling cool all thesame.

When you first touched me
I got lost in pleasure’s sea
When you first held my hands
My nerves stood on ends
I was trapped by your charm
Feeling cool all thesame.

When you first stared me in the eyes
I felt my heartbeat rise
When you eyes locked with mine
And a tingling sweet sensation up my spine
For making me feel this way
I’ll love you forever and a day.

When our lips first met
I was buoyed with a renewed zest
An electrifying desire
To daily hope for the better
For making me feel this way
I’ll love you forever and a day.



5 thoughts on “Forever And A Day” by EnigmatikPoet (@EnigmatikPoet)

  1. The sixth stanza should have come before it came
    Perhaps, second. A really nice poem all the same
    And I’m loving it forever and a day.
    Lol…
    Well written

    1. Thanks for stopping by. But I don’t see any other plausible way to arrange the stanza. The arrangement of stanzas is progressive. How can you jump from first sight to kissing them back to first touch? I think it is cool this way…thanks comrade forever and a day.

  2. I have a feeling yhu didn’t spend enough time rewriting this poem. It is not bad but it could definitely have shone.

    Next time.

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