Just like waterfall.
You pour out so much and it’s still not all.
You keep falling and no one says sorry.
Your consistence,like a lovers sleeping and waking thought never called worry.
Your loud affection for the ground is a drone at a distant.
Very intense;transfixes in an instant.
You create gorges;and make them steeper
Into an impressive depth,just to fall deeper.

11 thoughts on “Waterfall” by Whyte Datonye (@whyte)

  1. Jo (@josephoguche)

    Simply beautiful

    1. I appreciate the time you took to read through.
      Thank you.

  2. hmm! witty…nice one!, mind you,a writer is an observer of the every day society, you are welcome my friend

  3. ‘You pour out much, and it’s still not all’… Love this line for the many things it says.
    Well done, whyte. $ß.

    1. Your positive comment is a boost.
      I appreciate.

  4. well written…love this.

  5. Great metaphor, good read.

  6. This is simple and deep. Good work, I love it.

  7. Thank you, am encouraged.

  8. @Whyte, nice one. I know there is more where this came from.Keep writing and sharing .

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