Don’t Judge Me

Wear my shoes
Run my miles
Meet my woes
Know my smiles

You’ll meet more woes less smiles
After miles in my shoes
But me in my shoes less woes
More smiles making my miles

Wear my shoes
Run my miles
Meet my woes
Know my smiles
Then you’ll see
You shouldn’t judge me.



8 thoughts on “Don’t Judge Me” by EnigmatikPoet (@EnigmatikPoet)

  1. The ‘ile’ rhyme seemed forced. You could have made this a free verse, it woulda carried more punch. Nevertheless, it was a good attempt. Brief and to the point. Kudos.

    1. You think? Thanks.

  2. Jo (@josephoguche)

    Simple but beautiful … nice alliteration …

    1. Thanks a lot bro.

  3. I agree with @daireenonline, you could write better poetry (if only you try).

    1. Thank you, you’ll see more of my work.

  4. have told you that you good? Yes you are,but then this work was too witty in rhyme…@alozor

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